1、温馨提示：此题库为Word版，请按住Ctrl，滑动鼠标滚轴，调节合适的观看比例，关闭Word文档返回原板块。考点4 书面表达一、 提纲作文（2012安徽卷）假设美国某中学的学生明天来你校访问交流,主题是高中生对文、理科的选择。请你用英语写一篇发言稿,向他们介绍你所做的选择,并说明选择的理由。注意:1.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数;2.词数120左右;3.短文中不能出现与本人相关的信息。参考词汇:文科 arts; 理科scienceGood afternoon, everyone,Welcome to our school! Thanks!【思路点拨】1.本文写作体裁是发言稿,由于开头和结
2、尾已经给出,不必再考虑发言稿的格式。2.发言稿的交际对象是来校访问的外国学生,表示欢迎之后可以按照交际背景把欲说明的情况作一简短介绍。3.发言稿的主体内容是高中生对文、理科的选择,由于没有给出具体的选择理由,所以需要自己拟定合适的内容作为中心要点。4.内容要点:自己选择理科,理由如下:理科毕业生需求量大 可以实现儿时做科学家的梦想 父母认为学习理科前途光明 物理老师是学习榜样。5.需要的词汇和短语: 面对:be faced with 做选择:make a choice 需求量大:in great demand 实现的理想:achieve the dream of. 前途光明:have a br
3、ight future 某人的学习榜样:ones role model【参考范文】Good afternoon, everyone,Welcome to our school! High school students are faced with a choice between arts and science. It was not an easy choice for me to make. After careful consideration, though, I decided on science as my main subject of study. The reasons
4、 are as follows:First, science graduates are in greater demand than arts ones in China. Second, the science major can help me achieve my childhood dream of becoming a scientist. Third, my parents wish me to study science at college because they believe I will have a brighter future as a science stud
5、ent. Last but not least, my physics teacher is my role model, whose influence on me had a lot to do with my decision.It is for these reasons that I finally made my choice.Thanks!（2012湖南卷）Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.生活中,你自己或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失
6、而又找回的经历,其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨请就此写一篇英语短文。主要内容包括:1)丢失的物品;2)物品失而复得的经过;3)你的感想。注意:1.词数不少于120个;2.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。【思路点拨】(1)由题目要求可知本文主要内容是对物品失而复得经过的回忆,故本部分应用一般过去时,而就本经历的感想部分应该使用一般现在时。(2)本文的内容主要包括三个部分:1)丢失的物品;2)物品失而复得的经过;3)你的感想。在写作时,应注意这三部分内容的关系,主要集中在物品失而复得的经过及感想部分。(3)内容要点: 1.丢失/不见:be lost/ missing 2.张贴通知:put up notic
7、es 3.奖励、奖赏:reward 4.做好事:do good deeds【参考范文】I have a precious pen, which was given to me as a birthday present by one of my best friends. I like it very much, however, this pen once has an unusual experience.When I was a student of Grade Two, I lost my precious pen because of carelessness when our sc
8、hool was holding a sports meeting. I almost felt crazy when I realized that it was missing. I searched the playground carefully and even the road leading to my home. I put up several notices with its titleMy Precious Pen Lost, in which I promised to pay the one who gives the pen back to me 100 yuan.
9、 Several days later, I heard my name called by someone. It was a girl with a pen in her hand. I felt excited to see my precious pen back. I thanked this kind girl again and again, who didnt accept the money I gave her as a reward.From the unusual experience of my precious pen, I learn that we should
10、 be thankful to those who always do good deeds and also be ready to do what we can to help others.（2012江西卷）某英文报社举办以“I Like Reading”为主题的征文活动,你打算投稿。请根据以下要点写一篇短文:1.你为什么喜欢读书;2.你喜欢读哪一类的书(例如:历史、科学、文学等)?请给出至少两个理由。注意:词数120左右。【参考范文】I Like ReadingReading is my favorite hobby. I can never stop the love for rea
11、ding because books are like wise teachers as well as good friends in my life. As we know, books are the source of knowledge. I benefit a great deal from reading.There are a variety of books for us to choose from, like history books, science books, literary books and so on. But what interests me most
12、 is literary books, especially those by famous writers. For one thing, they help to improve my writing skills and broaden my horizons. For another, they can enrich my life and provide me with great fun. Isnt it a pleasure to have great calm in mind while you are reading?（2012辽宁卷）假定你是某中学的学生李华。请用英语给出版
13、社的编辑写一封信,表达你对现在使用的英语教材的看法,内容主要包括:优点:1.话题广泛;2.图片丰富;3.有助于提高学习兴趣。建议:适当降低词汇难度。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.开头语已为你写好,不计入总词数。One Possible VersionDear Editor,As a student reader, I am writing to talk about the English textbooks published by your house. These books have many advantages. One of them is t
14、hat we can find a variety of topics, such as science, culture and history. These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. Whats more, along with the texts there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. Even the students who used to dislike Eng
15、lish have turned out to be interested in the subject. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard for us. Therefore, Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones.Best regards, Li Hua【思路点拨】(1)本文是一篇提纲式作文,该书面表达为应用文中的书信写作,属传统的指导性写作。写好此文,需注意以下几点:一是时态把握要准确。文章基本时态
16、为一般现在时,同时兼顾其他的时态。二是要点要齐全,且详略得当。题目已给出了较为详尽的写作要求,要点作出了明确的规定,这些要点不能有遗漏。写作重点可放在对于教材优点的介绍上面。三是切忌照译,要适当地增加细节,恰当地使用连接过渡词,使行文连贯流畅。(2)通过审题,归纳出本文内容要点如下:肯定现行教材;赞赏教材的三点优点;一点建议。这三点为基本点,缺一不可。(3)内容要点:话题广泛(a variety of topics)受欢迎(be popular with)过去常常(used to do)建议做某事(suggest doing sth. ) （2012全国卷I） 假定你是李华,从互联网(the
17、Internet)上得知一个国际中学生组织将在新加坡(Singapore)举办夏令营,欢迎各国学生参加。请写一封电子邮件申请参加。内容主要包括:1.自我介绍(包括英语能力);2.参加意图(介绍中国、了解其他国家);3.希望获准。注意:1.词数100左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯; 3.邮件开头和结尾已为你写好。Dear Sir or Madam, Regards,Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam,Im Li Hua, a middle school student from China. I read the announcement of the sum
18、mer camp that you have posted on the Internet and I am interested in it. I know that you welcome students from different countries and Id like to take part in it. Ive been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English. What is more, Ill be able to tell students from other countries about
19、 China and learn about their countries as well. I hope I will be accepted as a member of your summer camp.Looking forward to your reply!Regards,Li Hua【思路点拨】(1)本题是一封电子邮件,要用第一人称写。由于文章内容是申请参加一个夏令营,需进行自我介绍,说明参加意图,因此,本文应以一般现在时和一般将来时为主。(2)本文要包含以下要点:自我介绍 参加意图希望获准。最后,写上期待对方答复。(3)内容要点:参加(take part in/partici
20、pate in)讲流利的英语(speak fluent English/speak English fluently)被接受为(be accepted as)期待答复(looking forward to your reply)（2012全国卷） 假定你是李华,你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加,要点包括:1.时间:周五晚8点至9点2.地点:学生俱乐部3.内容:生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等4.要求:备小礼物注意:1.词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.答案必须写在答题卡相应的位置上。Hi Susan,Were throwing a su
21、rprise party for Xiaomings birthday. 【思路点拨】写信是近几年最常见的写作文体,它可以有效地考查考生用英语表达自己的能力,增强考试的信度和区分度;提纲式作文让考生有话可说。【注意事项】1.书信的格式;2.表述的逻辑性和连贯性;3.内容的全面性;4.使用地道的英语。【参考范文】Hi Susan,Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. Wed like to invite you to the party. We want to give him a surprise, so please k
22、eep quiet about it. Well gather at the Students Club at 8 pm this Friday, after the evening classes. And its going to last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he comes, well light the candles and sing “Happy Birthday” together for him. Then the cake will be cut and well sing s
23、ongs and play games. Itll be nice to see how excited he will be. Im sure youll have a good time at the party, too.Yours,Li Hua （2012山东卷） 假设你是新华中学的学生李华,不久前在学校举办的英语竞赛中获得一等奖。校报请你写一篇稿件刊登在英文版面上,介绍你课外学习英语的经验。请根据以下提示用英语写一篇短文:1.参加英语角的益处;2.坚持写英语日记的作用;3.英文阅读网站(EnjoyReading)对你的帮助。注意:1.词数:120-150; 2.可适当增加细节,以使行
24、文连贯。【思路点拨】1.本文要求以李华的名义写一篇文章来介绍一下课外学习英语的经验,所以文章的题材应属于介绍经验类文章。时态应以一般现在时为主。2.写作时应列举出参加的三个主要活动及益处,保证要点全面,并尽量使用所积累的高级词汇,如participate in, take part in, manage to do, in addition, whats more等。3.注意文章结构的合理及层次的清晰,不是简单罗列汉语部分的信息,而应做到层次清晰并有一定的逻辑性,并可适当扩充,使文章内容更丰富。4.要应用常用句型,如定语从句及强调句等。 【参考范文】 My name is Li Hua. I
25、feel honoured to have the chance to share my out-of-class English learning experience with you. First of all, I often participate in English Corner, where I can talk and communicate with students and foreign teachers. Not only can I improve my oral English but also I learn some customs in western co
26、untries. Secondly, I insist on keeping a diary, which can improve my ability of expressing myself in English and help me to put what Ive learnt to use. In addition, I often surf the Internet and browse Enjoy Reading, which enlarges my vocabulary and helps to improve my reading speed and my reading c
27、omprehension ability. Furthermore, it opens a window for me to see the world. Its because of this and my effort in class that I managed to get the first place in the English Contest held recently in our school. I hope my experience will be of some help to you and I also wish for your advice. （2012四川
28、卷） 假如你是大学一年级新生李华。开学之初,你的英语老师Ms Li希望了解每位同学的英语学习情况,并征求教学建议。请按以下要点用英语给她写一封信。1.对英语学习的认识;2.自己目前的英语水平;3.自己英语学习存在的主要问题;4.对英语教学的两点建议。注意:1.词数100左右;2.信的开头和结尾已给出。Dear Ms Li,Im very happy to have you as our English teacher. Thank you!Li Hua【思路点拨】1.审题:文体:应用文书信时态:一般现在时人称:第一人称2.要点:(1)对英语学习的认识(2)自己目前的英语水平(3)自己英语学习中
29、存在的主要问题(4)对英语教学的两点建议3.参考词汇和句式:(1) play an important role/part in(2) Its necessary for.to do(3) Its difficult/hard for.to (4) make great progress【参考范文】Dear Ms Li, Im very happy to have you as our English teacher. As the world is becoming a global village, English is getting more and more important, s
30、o mastering English means we can see the world through a new window. My English is just OK and the two main problems in my study are that I feel it difficult to learn words by heart, and that I often feel nervous when speaking English. I really hope that you can give me good advice on how to memoriz
31、e new words. Another suggestion is to give us more chances to practice speaking. I believe we can make much progress in English with your help. Thank you!Li Hua (2012天津卷)假设你是李津,你的美国朋友Chris就读于天津某国际学校。他热爱中国文化,特别是戏曲文化。8月5日下午2:00在新落成的天津大剧院将上演越剧梁山伯与祝英台。请你根据以下提示,用英语给Chris写一封电子邮件,邀请他一起观看演出。提出邀请并简述原因;提出观剧后活
32、动建议(如参观附近的博物馆或美术馆等);请求对方回复。注意:1.请使用规范英语,词数不少于100;2.可适当加入细节,以使内容充实、行文连贯;3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:越剧Shaoxing Opera梁山伯与祝英台Butterfly Lovers天津大剧院Tianjin Grand TheaterDear Chris,I have good news to tell you. Yours,Li Jin【思路点拨】(1)本题是一封电子邮件,所以用第一人称。由于是计划去看越剧,观剧后还有一些活动,因此以一般将来时为主,同时结合一般现在时。(2)要包含提示要点介绍越剧上演的时间和
33、地点提出邀请,简述原因观剧后的活动建议请求对方回复。(3)内容要点: 邀请你去(invite you to.)上演(put on)喜欢(be fond of/have an appetite for)【参考范文】Dear Chris,I have good news to tell you. Id like to invite you to see Butterfly Lovers, a famous Chinese Shaoxing Opera, which is to be put on at the newly built Tianjin Grand Theater at 2:00 p.
34、m. on August 5th. As you know, as your close friend, I know you are fond of Chinese culture, especially opera culture.Of course, besides going to the theater, we can do some other meaningful things, such as visiting the museum or the art gallery nearby, which both contain a lot of items of great val
35、ue. Im sure that we will have a good time.Im looking forward to receiving your reply.Best wishes.Yours,Li Jin二、图画作文/漫画作文 （2012北京卷） 假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,校报英文版正在开展“续写雷锋日记”活动。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,将你所做的一件好事以日记形式记述下来,向校报投稿。注意:1.日记的开头已为你写好。2.词数不少于60。Saturday, June 2 Fine This morning, 【思路点拨】(1)本题通过四幅图介绍了李华在路上做的好事
36、。文章要求用日记的形式叙述,因此应写成以过去时态为主的记叙文。(2)四幅图主要是讲述了李华偶遇路人并向路人提供帮助的事情,是生活中熟悉的话题。写作时,应把时间、地点、人物、事件及过程写得具体而详实,最后应对此事谈一下自己的感受。(3)内容要点发现路人(see two travelers)询问情况(ask what happened)告诉路线(tell how)挥手告别(wave goodbye to )【参考范文】One possible version:Saturday, June 2 FineThis morning, when I was walking on the street, I
37、 saw that two travelers were reading a map, looking puzzled. It seemed they were lost. I went up to them and asked how I could help. They told me they were looking for the Temple of Heaven. I led them to the nearby bus stop and advised them to take Bus No.20, which could take them there directly. Th
38、ey appreciated my help greatly. Before long, the bus came. We waved goodbye to each other. Seeing them on the bus, I felt a kind of satisfaction.（2012福建卷）假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者,以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻,请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。内容要求:1.描述漫画内容;2.发表个人感想。注意:1.短文标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数；2.考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯；3.词数120左右；4.文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:告示牌
39、signMind Your Behavior in Public PlacesLast Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park. 【思路点拨】1.首先对漫画进行语言描述。一男一女在湖中划船,岸上木牌明确写道:湖中勿丢垃圾!但两人一边感叹“啊,多美的景色!”一边随意乱丢垃圾。因此可用第一人称的视角,用记叙文的形式来写。2.第二段可对这种行为发表个人看法。环境需要大家共同维护,只有人人把保护环境作为己任,我们才能有更美好的生活。【参考范文】Mind Your Behavior in Public Place
40、sLast Sunday, I went sightseeing with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring, with the sun shining and birds singing. When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around, something unpleasant caught my eye. A young couple in a boat were eating, talking and
41、 laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world. Whats worse, they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake, totally ignoring the noticeable sign “No Littering” nearby. What a shame!Such behavior left me deep in thought. If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did, the
42、 lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin. I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places. Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.(2012陕西卷)假定你是李华。下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织的一次活动,请根据写作要点并参考图画内容,为校刊“英语角”版面写一篇短文。写作要点:1.活动的策划；2.教室的布置；3.
43、活动的内容；4.你的感想。注意:1.短文词数不少于100；2.开头部分已写好,不计入总词数；3.可根据情况增减细节,详略得当；4.不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。 Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers Day: she did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her. 【思路点拨】(1)本文要求根据一
44、幅画和写作要点提示描述教师节那天你们班为英语老师组织的一次庆祝活动。(2)审题:属于半开放性的记叙文；时态主要是一般过去时；人称:第一人称。(3)内容要点:活动策划:As Teachers Day was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate.教室的布置:decorate our classroom with.活动内容:stand in line, clap hands and say loudly “Happy Teachers Day!”; present her with the prepared flow
45、ers; sing songs感想:cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance【参考范文】 Ms. Li, our English teacher, must have found it strange on Teachers Day: she did not receive a single greeting card from us students. She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her.As Teachers Da
46、y was approaching, our class decided to hold a party to celebrate the important day for a change this year. On the afternoon of September 10, some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowers and balloons, and others went to buy cakes, drinks and fruits. The blackboard was decorated with beautif
47、ul words, which read “Happy Teachers Day!”Entering the classroom, Ms. Li was surprised to find we were standing in line, clapping hands and saying loudly “Happy Teachers Day!” Wang Hua, our monitor, presented her with the prepared flowers. Some of the girls sang songs for Ms. Li, and three boys show
48、ed their kung fu talent. Before we left, we enjoyed a new English song by Ms. Li.Ms. Li spent a wonderful time with us, but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all her hard work and guidance. （2012上海卷） Directions: Write an English composition in 120150 words according to the instructions giv
49、en below in Chinese. 上周一,你在一所小学观摩了小女孩Amy所在班级的两堂绘画课(如图所示),回家后你用英语写了一篇日记,内容包括:对两堂绘画课的具体描述；你从中获得的启发。 【思路点拨】首先,本文属于图片作文,提供的图片有两张,提高了对于描写的要求。高考英语作文已经不再仅仅考查学生的议论能力,它有些借鉴中文作文,要求学生夹叙夹议。在叙述中,如果只是平铺直叙那显然得不到高分。描写的关键在于捕捉事物的特征,而高考作文往往要求学生在短短几句话中描写到位。其次,图片的含义并不是显而易见的,需要看出每张图背后的意义并将两张图结合起来说。再次,文章要求考生用日记的方式写。【参考范文】
50、June 8, 2012At a primary school, I saw in one class a student dipped her feet in ink and made a painting out of footprints. By contrast, the same student used a brush to make a breath-taking landscape painting-so vivid that one could almost smell the refreshing rivers and hear the singing birds.“Kee
51、p your eyes on the stars and your feet on the ground.” Its this famous saying on success that lends insight into the two paintings. The first painting represents that we should remain grounded and be cautious of being carried away with temporary success. So grand was the scenery portrayed in the sec
52、ond painting that it embodied the reach of our dreams. Wed be better off trusting that the gleam and the spark will one day shine as brightly as a searchlight if we have faith in ourselves.The paintings taught me a lot.三、图表作文（2012江苏卷）生活中冲突时有发生。假设你班同学苏华和李江打篮球时发生争执,导致关系紧张。请你结合此事,并根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文, 向学校英
53、文报“Happy Teens”专栏投稿。简要描述事情的经过打篮球、碰撞、争执,等等分析发生冲突的原因1. 遇事不够冷静 2. 谈谈避免冲突的做法(请考生根据自己的经历或感想,提出至少两种做法)注意:1.对所有要点逐一陈述,适当发挥,不要简单翻译。2.词数150 左右。开头已经写好,不计入总词数。3.作文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息,如校名、人名等。 Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. 【思路点拨】(1)本题为半开放作文,要求学生介绍事情经过、冲突原因以及避免冲突的做法。在写作中,学生首先应该注意时态的变化。在叙述事情的经
54、过以及冲突原因时应该使用过去时,在谈及避免冲突的做法时应该使用一般现在时。(2)学生还应注意段落清晰,行文流畅。根据要点提示,作文最好分为三段,第一段介绍事情经过,第二段分析冲突原因,第三段谈论避免冲突的做法,提出建议。(3)内容要点:碰撞(bump into) 争执(quarrel) 关系紧张(tense relationship) 过错(fault) 该受到责备(be to blame) 过分关注输赢(care too much about winning and losing) 避免冲突(avoid conflicts) 设身处地为他人着想(put ourselves in others
55、 place )【参考范文】Conflicts with others are common in everyday life. During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball. Then they started shouting and yelling, and it turned into a horrible quarrel.To be honest, it was Sus fault but Li w
56、as also to blamethey were not calm enough and both said some really mean things. They cared too much about winning and losing. As a matter of fact, blocking, pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game.To avoid such conflicts, we should be kind to one another, which is essential to enjoying a
57、harmonious life. It is also a virtue to forgive and forget, especially in such a competitive and stressful society. Instead of blaming each other, we should communicate more and put ourselves in others place. Dont be self-centered and try to be considerate. We must learn to handle conflicts calmly a
58、nd wisely.四、（半）开放作文（2012北京卷） 请根据下面提示,写一篇短文。词数不少于50。You are discussing the following picture with your English friend Jim. Now you are telling him how you understand the picture and what makes you think so. 【思路点拨】(1)本文是开放性作文,要求根据提示,就漫画内容发表自己的看法,应写成以一般现在时态为主的说明文。(2)本文应首先描述漫画内容,然后展开想像,挖掘漫画中人物的内心想法。最后再联
59、系现实,表明自己的态度。(3)内容要点白铅笔在嘲笑黑铅笔(laugh at)黑铅笔的反应(calm, fall into deep thoughts)现实中,我们该向黑铅笔学习(learn from the black pencil)【参考范文】One possible version:I think the white pencil, looking proud and delighted, is laughing at the black pencil by saying “Youre nearing the end!” The black pencil, on the other han
60、d, remains calm. The white pencils words let him fall into deep thoughts. He clearly remembers he has been used in writing and drawing. Its true that hes approaching the end but he has been living a memorable life and there has rarely been a dull moment.In reality, we should learn from the black pen
61、cil: not to mind what others say so long as we are confident in what we have done.（2012湖北卷）请根据以下提示,并结合事例,用英语写一篇短文。You cannot choose what you are given, but you can choose how you make use of it.注意:无须写标题,不得照抄英语提示语；除诗歌外,文体不限；文中不得透露个人姓名和学校名称；词数为120左右。 【参考范文】 Three years ago I failed an important exam i
62、n my life and became a student in an ordinary school. Disappointed as I felt at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom, I found the teachers patient and considerate. Besides, I enjoyed the friendly atmosphere in class. I decided to make the best use of it. I worked hard and got along we
63、ll with my teachers and classmates. Whenever I had difficulties, they were always available. Soon, I became one of the top students in my class, which greatly increased my confidence and got me motivated.My experience tells me that it is not what you are given but how you make use of it that determi
64、nes who you are.（2012浙江卷）你校正在进行“英语读书周”活动。该活动要求学生摘录名言佳句(quote)并相互交流,以下是某同学摘录的句子:“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you”。请按下列要求用英语写一篇100-120个词的短文:1.针对摘录句中的观点谈谈你的看法；2.举例说明理由。注意:短文的开头已给出(不计词数)。In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like th
65、is: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.” 【参考范文】In the English Reading Week, one of my classmates recommended a quote to us, which goes like this: “Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you.” I cant agree more with this view. Its true that our future is determined by m
66、any things, such as opportunities and help from others, but our own attitude, determination, and hard work play a more important role. In other words, we are the master of our own future.Take Abraham Lincoln, for example. He was born in a poor family, and only received a limited education in his chi
67、ldhood. Yet through his painstaking efforts, he changed not only his own fate but also the history of America. Even to this day, Lincoln is regarded as one of the most inspiring figures in the world. Therefore, I firmly believe that our future is in our own hands.【思路点拨】1.仔细审题:(1)文体:议论文(2)时态:以一般现在时为主
68、。(3)人称:第一人称为主。(4)段落:可分两段或三段两段:第一段:陈述观点；第二段,举例说明理由三段:第一段:陈述观点；第二段,举例说明理由；第三段:总结2.归纳要点:(1)你对于名言“Your future depends on many things, but mostly on you”的看法。(2)举出一些例子来说明你的理由。注意事项:(1)从话题看,该题符合考生的认知发展水平。考生可以联系熟悉的事例。(2)要写好这篇短文,需要考生有评判性思维能力,用事实论证观点。3.参考词汇:(1) be in favor of; I cant agree more; I think it is
69、reasonable; Its true that.(2) take sth./ sb. for example.;for instance/example; we can learn from.(3) in a word, in one word, in brief, therefore.(2012重庆卷)某国际网站提供个人闲置物品交换服务。现在,你打算通过该网站将自己的一件闲置物品与他人交换(exchange)。请你用英文在该网站上发帖,发布物品交换信息。内容应包括:你将拿出什么物品进行交换具体介绍该物品你希望换回什么物品请愿意交换的朋友给你留言注意:(1)词数100左右；(2)格式不限；
70、(3)文中不得使用考生真实姓名和学校名称。 【思路点拨】(1)本文是半开放式作文,要求在提供个人闲置物品交换的网站上发布物品交换信息,将自己的一件闲置物品与他人交换。发布物品信息,需要介绍物品的特点,故应写成以现在时态为主的说明文。(2)本文应首先点明主题:自己想拿出什么物品进行交换,并重点介绍该物品的详细信息,如物品的新旧程度、功能特点等。其次应再写想换回什么样的物品,以及自己对该物品的要求,最后应在文末写明请愿意交换的朋友留言。(3)内容要点:你所交换的物品名称介绍该物品的特点你希望交换到什么样的物品请愿意交换的朋友留言【参考范文】I have a collection of Englis
71、h-Chinese bilingual readingsthe Bookworm Series V, which is suitable for the students in Senior 2 or Senior 3. It is made up of six world-famous novels and with it is an MP3 CD which can provide you with excellent pronunciation. I have greatly improved my English by reading and listening. Besides, I
72、 am a book-lover and the books are so well kept that they are as good as new.Now Im graduating from senior high school and the book is not fit for me, so I want to exchange it for a Longman Dictionary of Contemporary English which I think will be good for my college study. I dont care whether it is new or not as long as it is intact.If anyone wants to exchange, leave message here, please.关闭Word文档返回原板块
