1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家优培18 短文改错真题在线1.应用记叙文（2020全国I卷短文改错）Today I tried cooking a simply dish myself. I like eating frying tomatoes with eggs, and I thought it must to be easy to cook. My mom told me how to preparing it. First I cut the tomatoes into pieces but put them aside.Next I broke the eggs into a bo
2、wl and beat them quickly with chopstick. After that I poured oil into a pan and turned off the stove, I waited patiently unless the oil was hot. Then I put the tomatoes and the beaten eggs into pan together. “Not that way,”my mom tried to stop us but failed. She was right. It didnt turn out as I had
3、 wished.【答案】1.第一句，simply改为simple2.第二句，frying改为fried3.第二句，删去must后的to4.第三句，preparing改为prepare5.第四句，but改为and6.第五句，chopstick改为chopsticks7.第六句，off改为on8.第六句，unless改为until/till9.第七句，在pan前加the10.第八句，us改为me【解析】这是一篇记叙文，讲述了作者做西红柿炒鸡蛋的过程。1.考查形容词。此处需用形容词修饰dish，故将simply改为simple。2.考查过去分词。此处为过去分词作定语修饰名词，故将frying改为fr
4、ied。3.考查情态动词的用法。情态动词must后接动词原形，故去掉must后面的to。4.考查动词。此处是“疑问词+to do”结构，故将preparing改为prepare。5.考查连词。前后句是递进关系，故将but改为and。6.考查名词的数。根据常识可知，此处应用复数形式，故将chopstick改为chopsticks。7.考查动词词组。根据语境可知，此处表示“打开炉子”，turn on“打开”，故将off改为on。8.考查连词。句意：我耐心地等着，直到油热起来。此处表示“直到”，故将unless改为until/till。9.考查冠词。前文提到了pan，此处再次提到，应用定冠词，故在p
5、an前加the。10.考查代词。句意：我母亲试图阻止我，但失败了。故将us改为me。（2020全国III卷短文改错）My mom is really concerning with the health of everyone in our families. In order to make surely all of us are in good health, and she makes specific plans for us. For example, every morning, my dad has to have the bowl of egg soup while I ha
6、d to eat an apple. My dad dont like the soup and I dont enjoy apples. I tell my mom that if were forced eat things, we may become ill.But he insists on us eating healthy food. Understanding her good intentions, I eat all the food what is provided by Mom with appreciation.【答案】1.第一句，concerning改为concer
7、ned2.第一句，families改为family3.第二句，surely改为sure4.第二句，删去and5.第三句，the改为a6.第三句，had改为have7.第四句，dont改为doesnt8.第五句，在forced后加to9.第六句，he改为she10.第七句，what改为that【解析】这是一篇记叙文。文章主要讲了作者的妈妈非常关心家里每个人的身体，坚持让全家人吃健康食物。一开始，家人有些排斥。但在母亲的坚持下，我充满感激地接受了母亲的好意。1.考查固定短语。be concerned with：关心，该短语是固定短语，所以concerning改成concerned。2.考查名词单复
8、数。family当“家庭”讲时，是集合名词，这里表示“我们这个家庭”，所以用单数，families改成family。3.考查固定短语。make sure：确保，该短语是固定短语，所以surely改成sure。4.考查简单句。这是一个简单句，前面in order to.作目状语，不用连词and，所以去掉and。5.考查冠词。句意：例如：每天早晨，我的父亲不得不喝一碗鸡蛋汤，然而，我不得不吃一个苹果。泛指一碗鸡蛋汤，bowl以辅音音素开头，用不定冠词a，所以the改成a。6.考查时态。根据时间状语every morning，可知这里表示经常或反复发生的事情，用一般现在时，主语为I，谓语动词要用原形
9、。所以had改成have。7.考查主谓一致。句意：我爸爸不喜欢汤，我也不喜欢苹果。表示经常或反复发生的事情，用一般现在时。主语my dad是第三人称单数，谓语动词用单数，所以dont改成doesnt。8.考查固定句型。be forced to do sth.：被迫做某事，所以在forced后面加to。9.考查代词。句意：但是她坚持让我们吃健康的食物。此处指“我的妈妈”，是女性，所以he改成she。10.考查定语从句。句意：出于对妈妈好意的理解，我满怀感激地吃着妈妈给的所有食物。这里含有一个定语从句，先行词是all the food，关系词在从句中作主语，指物，可用that或which，先行词被
10、all所修饰，只能使用that，不能使用which，且what不能引导定语从句，所以what改成that。2.应用应用文（2020全国II卷短文改错）Thank you for your letter, what really made me happy. Im glad to know that youve come China to learn kung fu in a school in my hometown. Im surely youll have a good time. Actually, I start to learn kung fu when I was seven ye
11、ars old, for I have long been out of practice. Luckily, I will go home in two weeks for summer vacations. Then I can spare some time to learn it again, such that we can practice together on every day. Best of luck with yours learning kung fu in China. See you sooner.【答案】1.第一句，what改为which; 2.第二句，在com
12、e后加to3.第三句，surely改为sure4.第四句，start改为started5.第四句，for改为but/yet6.第五句，vacations改为vacation7.第六句，such改为so8.第六句，删掉on9.第七句，yours改为your/you10.第八句，sooner改为soon【解析】本文为一篇应用文，介绍了自己学习功夫的经历。1.考查定语从句。此处为引导词引导非限制性定语从句，修饰前面整个句子，且在从句中作主语，故把what改为which。2.考查介词。come to China，为固定搭配，故在come后加to。3.考查形容词。由Im中am为系动词，后应加形容词作表语
13、，故改surely为sure。4.考查一般过去时。由“when I was”可知，主句应用一般过去时，故改start为started。5.考查连词。句意：实际上，我从7岁开始学功夫，但是我很久没有练习过了。结合句意，故改and为but/yet。6.考查名词。summer vacation作为整体时，不需要用复数形式，故改vacations为vacation。7.考查状语从句。so that表示以便于，故改such为so。8.考查介词。every day为时间状语，不需要加on，故删除on。9.考查代词。with sb./sb.s doing为动名词的复合结构。故改yours为your/you。
14、10.考查副词。结合句意，可知此处需用副词原形，无比较概念，故改sooner为soon。提分训练Passage 1Dear Joe,I am more than delighted to sincere invite you to be a judge for a speech contest. I hope you can agree to come. For your reference, I will share with you the details as follow. First of all, this contest focuses on Man and Nature, th
15、at is scheduled to start at 2 p.m. and ends at 4 p.m. next week in Classroom 301. Ten players will attend the contest, give their prepared speeches. In my opinion, not only can you provide us with our professional judgment, but also you can enjoy scenery around our school. You will surely have a goo
16、d time in this beautiful spring day.Ill be very much grateful if you can accept my invitations. I am looking forward to you arrival.Yours,Jenny【答案】1.第一句，sincere改为sincerely2.第三句，follow改为follows3.第四句，that改为which4.第四句，ends改为end5.第五句，give改为giving6.第六句，our改为your/the7.第六句，enjoy后加the8.第七句，in改为on9.第八句，much去
17、掉10.第八句，invitations改为invitation【解析】这是一篇邀请信。作者邀请Joe来演讲比赛做评委，并与Joe分享了这次演讲比赛的一些细节信息。1.考查副词。原句中的sincere直接修饰动词invite，应该用副词形式。故将sincere改为sincerely。2.考查固定搭配。as follows是一个习语，意思是：如下。通常放在句末。故将follow改为follows。3.考查定语从句。句意：首先，这场竞赛是关于人与自然的，安排在下午两点开始四点结束。从翻译以及that前逗号可知这是一个非限制性定语从句，先行词为this contest，故将that改为which。4.
18、考查不定式。此句中and前后是两个并列的动作，一个是竞赛开始时间，一个是竞赛结束时间，句式结构相同，都是be scheduled to do sth.，前后都是不定式时省略第二个to，故将ends改为end。5.考查现在分词。句意：十个选手会参加竞赛，他们会分别进行他们提前准备好的演讲。这个句子中will attend是谓语动词，give就需要变为非谓语动词。又因为the players与give speech是主动关系，故将give改为giving。6.考查物主代词。这里专业的评价是Joe提供的，物主代词应与you一致，故将our改为your或者the。7.考查定冠词。欣赏学校周边的风景，这
19、里的风景是特指关系，故在enjoy后加the。8.考查介词。在具体某一天用介词on。故将in改为on。9.考查副词。句意：若你能接受我的邀请，我会不胜感激。grateful是形容词原级形式，而much是用来修饰形容词或副词比较级的。故将much去掉。10.考查名词的数。这是一个邀请，不需要用名词复数形式。故将invitations改为invitation。Passage 2It was a rain and cold night. I finish my evening classes and was about to go back to my house, I got into a tax
20、i and told the driver my destination. To my surprise, the driver made an apology, says he didnt know the way. What come a taxi driver didnt know the way? I was a little of angry. At the moment, an old couple stopped our car. Their destination was the same as me, so he let them in. The two greeted us
21、 but the grandpa told the driver the way. From their conversation I knew the driver was a farmer and he had become a taxi driver just for three days.Im also new to Chengdu. Sometimes I make direction mistakes, but there is always someone can help me. It was cold outside, but I felt real warm.【答案】1.第
22、一句，rain改为rainy2.第二句，finish改为finished3.第三句，says改为saying4.第四句，What改为How5.第五句，删除of6.第七句，me改为mine7.第八句，but改为and8.第九句，become改为been9.第十一句，在someone后加who10.第十二句，real改为really【解析】本文是记叙文，叙述了作者在一个寒冷下雨的晚上，上了一辆出租车，结果司机不认识路，作者感到不愉快，这时，有一对老夫妻也上了同一辆车，这位老人告诉了司机路线，原来这位司机三天前才开始工作。1.考查形容词。句意：那是个寒冷的雨夜。and后是形容词cold，修饰后面的名
23、词，所以and前后都应该用形容词，rain是名词，rainy形容词。故rain改为rainy。2.考查动词时态。根据and was about to go back可知，and后用的一般过去时，and前也是叙述的过去的事，所以finish也用一般过去时。故finish改为finished。3.考查非谓语动词。句意：令我惊讶的是，司机道歉说他不认识路。句子没有连词，已经有谓语动词made，所以says应该变为非谓语动词，句子的主语the driver与say之间是主动关系，所以应该用saying，故says改为saying。4.考查名词。句意：出租车司机怎么会不认识路呢？句式：How come是
24、固定搭配,意为：怎么会？怎么回事？它和Why一样，可以用来引导一个问句。所不同的是，如果用How come来提问，就表示你觉得某件事很奇怪，有点想不通；并且以How come开头的问句使用的仍是陈述句的语序。另外，以How come开头的问句有时也可说成：How comes it(about) that?/How is it that?故What改为How。5.考查短语。句意：我有点生气。a little修饰形容词angry。故删除of。6.考查代词。句意：他们的目的地和我的一样，所以他让他们上车了。the same as相比较的对象应该是同类的，应该是他们的目的地与我的目的地相比，me指人，
25、mine=my destination。故me改为mine。7.考查连词。这里前后句是并列关系，不是转折关系。故but改为and。8.考查动词。句意：他刚当了三天的出租车司机。根据时间状语for+时间段，所以谓语动词应该用持续性动词，become是非持续性动词，变成be表示状态的词。时态用现在完成时。故become改为been。9.考查定语从句关系词。someone是先行词，指人，缺少定语从句的关系词，关系词在定语从句中作主语，所以不能省略，所以在someone后加关系词who，故who。10.考查名词。句意：外面很冷，但我觉得很温暖。felt是感官动词，后跟形容词warm，形容词前用副词来修
26、饰，real是形容词，really副词，修饰形容词warm。故real改为really。Passage 3Dear Dad,You are very busy every day that you never pay enough attention to your health. I was worried about your health all the time. Id like to give you some advices. I hear that walking is the best sport. Your company isnt far away from home, i
27、s it? Why not to walking to the office? Youd better take exercise at most once a week. You can play a basketball in the gym. Going to swim is a nice choice too. Try not stay up too lately. Having enough sleep can help your brain work better. Of course, this is very important to have healthy food. Da
28、d, please receive my advice. I really wish you good health!Your loving daughter,Mary【答案】1.第一句，very改为so2.第二句，was改为am3.第三句，advices改为advice4.第六句，去掉to5.第六句，walking改为walk6.第七句，most改为least7.第八句，去掉a8.第十句，lately改为late9.第十二句，this改为it10.第十三句，receive改为accept【解析】本文为一篇应用文。一位女儿因担心父亲，而给父亲写了一封信，让父亲注意自己的身体。1.考查结果状语从
29、句。句意：你每天都很忙，对自己的健康总是不够重视。分析句子，本句为结果状语从句，so.that引导结果状语从句，意为：如此以至。故very改为so。2.考查一般现在时。句意：我一直担心你的健康。分析语境，用一般现在时。故was改为am。3.考查不可数名词。advice为不可数名词。故advices改为advice。4.考查固定搭配。句意：为什么不步行去办公室呢？why not+动词原形为固定搭配，意为“为什么不？”。故去掉to。5.考查固定搭配。why not+动词原形为固定搭配，walk应用动词原形。故walking改为walk。6.考查固定搭配。分析句意，应该为每周至少锻炼一次，at least为固定搭配，意为至少。故most改为least。7.考查冠词。句意：你可以在体育馆打篮球。球类前不加冠词。故去掉a。8.考查副词。句意：尽量不要熬夜太晚。late为副词，意为“时间晚地”；lately意为“最近地”。故lately改为late。9.考查形式主语。句意：当然，吃健康的食物是非常重要的。it is very important to中it作形式主语。故this改为it。10.考查动词。接受建议用accept。故receive改为accept。- 9 - 版权所有高考资源网
