1、Period Writing |读后续写回忆亲人本单元的写作主要是读后续写，写作主题是回忆亲人。在写作此类型文章时要注意以下几点：1原文中的人称和时态。既然是读后续写，就要和原文的人称和时态保持一致。2原文中的人物信息。主题是回忆亲人，对原文出现的人物特点要精准掌握。3原文中的故事发展。在续写故事时，故事的发展脉络和逻辑要清晰合理。1However decisive she may be at the office, she will secondguess herself constantly as a mother.任凭她在办公室多么果断，作为母亲，她仍经常后悔当时的决定。2I want
2、my sister to know that every decision will no longer be routine.我想让我妹妹知道，她将再也不能按照常规做出决定。3My mommy made it just for me.我妈妈专门为我做的。4At the front of the first car looking out the window at the track that lay ahead were a man and his son.在头节车厢的最前面，坐着一个男人和他的儿子，他们正透过窗户观赏着一直往前延伸的铁道。5He keeps begging his par
3、ents to let him see his sister.他一直乞求父母，让他进去看看小妹妹。6The other woman that my wife wanted me to visit was my mother.我妻子想让我去拜访的另一个女人，就是我的妈妈。7Dad never tried to hug or kiss me when I was a child.在我很小的时候，爸爸从来不抱我，也从来不亲吻我。8What makes a good mother anyway?是什么能成就一个好母亲？阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。I was touche
4、d through experiences, memories, books, stories, animals, angels, and most of all other people. People have moved me and molded (对影响重大) me with moments of love and examples of kindness. One time on the day before Christmas many years ago when I was a minimum wage mill (工厂) worker, I found myself wit
5、h very little money and very little time to buy my small children a few simple toys. I knew that they would have to be cheap ones and I hoped my children would like them. I hated not having enough to give them more. I hated being poor. And I hated feeling bad at Christmas rather than happy.I pulled
6、into a store parking lot and counted my money again. It wasnt much but maybe I could get something small with it. As I was getting out of the car I noticed the Salvation Army (救世军) bell ringer at the entrance. I felt bad again because I didnt feel I could spare anything to give him. I started walkin
7、g towards the entrance when two cars pulled into empty parking spots in front of me. The first was a shiny, new Cadillac and I felt a twinge of jealousy when I saw it. “How nice，” I thought, “would it be to have enough money to buy a car like that.” The second car, though, was an ancient sedan (轿车)
8、more beatup and rusty than the one I was driving. A man hopped (冲) out of the Cadillac and hurried into the store right past the bell ringer without a second glance. Out of the old sedan came a young mother with three small children in tow (紧随着). Her clothes looked as worn out as her car, yet she st
9、opped in front of the bell ringer, smiled, opened her purse, and dropped a bill in his red kettle (钱罐)注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：I stood there for a minute in astonishment. Paragraph 2：In that second a stream of warmth touched m
10、e, my jealousy and hatred (憎恨)left me, and all the love and joy filled me. 精彩范文Paragraph 1：I stood there for a minute in astonishment. “Maybe，” I thought to myself, “its better to be rich on the inside instead of the outside.” That rich man should have done something to help the poor, but he didnt.
11、Sometimes it was really wrong to judge a person by his or her appearance. I really had respect for the poor mother from the bottom of my heart. She set a good example for her children to follow.Paragraph 2：In that second a stream of warmth touched me, my jealousy and hatred (憎恨)left me, and all the
12、love and joy filled me. I searched for a bill out of my own purse, dropped it in the red kettle, and wished the bell ringer a merry Christmas. I found a few fun things to give my kids and drove home with my heart singing. I knew it was going to be a wonderful Christmas. I could hardly wait to see my
13、 children enjoying the presents bought for them, including a special giftlove for those in need.总评文章整体写作流畅自然，心理和精神层面的描写细腻生动，体现了变化和转折，充满正能量。亮点呈现(1)“That rich man should have done something . ”中should have done表示“应该做某事而实际上没有做”，准确体现出作者对富人行为的批评态度。(2)“from the bottom of my heart”，“set a good example”词组的运
14、用准确得当。(3)“with my heart singing”，“see my children enjoying”结构的运用简洁生动，令文章句式显得高级。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。My Dads Best FlowerI remember my first home was a small apartment on the second floor with a lovely and spacious balcony. When my mum was busy in the kitchen, she let me stay on the balcony w
15、atching the kids playing in the street. On that balcony I played sometimes with my elder sister, Maria. She was seven years old and when my mum was absent, she was like a mother to me. The balcony was a great hobby place for my father. After his work he used to grow carnations (康乃馨) in flower boxes.
16、 His carnations were red, pink and white, and everyone appreciated them for their beauty. He took care of them with so much love and devotion. He dealt carefully with his flowers like a mother taking care of her baby. Many times I sat on the floor of the balcony for hours observing him and his lovel
17、y flowers with patience. He was always doing something on that balcony. He was watering them every day, cleaning the balcony floor, changing the potting soil and when the stems were thick, strong and high enough, he started his improvement operation attentively like a doctor.My dad took a tiny knife
18、 and with his left hand he held the stem of the carnation and measured the height. Then he made a small mark on the stem with his finger. Afterwards he made a sharp cut with the knife, just enough to fit in a grain of barley (插穗的芽). Then he bandaged the stem with a small bandage. His job was then to
19、 water the plants and to take care of them. “No one should touch them，” he said to Mum. Every day, when he came home from work he went straight to the balcony. Mum used to tell us, “Do not touch Daddys flowers.” For us it was a fascinating experience to watch how the small stems were growing and mak
20、ing flowers. When the carnations had grown big enough, my dad enjoyed watching them every day. We the kids did too. 注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：One day, my elder sister, who loved Dad very much, had a great idea. Paragraph 2：When
21、 my dad arrived, he went as usual, straight to the balcony and saw his flowers lying on the floor like dead animals. 写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。“我”小的时候，父亲十分爱花，在家里的阳台上种植了康乃馨，他精心照顾这些花，担心他的花受到伤害，特别叮嘱母亲不要让人碰触他的花。精彩范文Paragraph 1：Paragraph 2：课外拓展阅读中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。Traditional Chinese Wedd
22、ingTraditional Chinese wedding customs have been around for thousands of years. They may vary from place to place and time to time, but have been holding 1 important position in the lives of Chinese people, 2 (cause) farreaching (影响深远的) effects on the way the Chinese lead their lives. A traditional
23、Chinese marriage usually consists 3 some necessary procedures, such as matchmaking, engagement, meeting the bride, and three bows. In addition, a typical Chinese wedding nowadays 4 (go) like this: when a new couple is engaged, 5 follows is a choice of the date of their marriage.Most people would fav
24、or a public holiday or special Chinese festival for 6 (they) relatives and friends 7 (attend) the wedding. However, quite a few others, 8 (especial) those in the countryside, would fix a lucky date so that their marriage would have “Double Happiness”. The wedding ceremony is usually hosted warmly an
25、d wedding guests would 9 (treat) to a unique wedding feast. 10 (toast) are made to wish the new couple everlasting love, happiness and early birth of a healthy baby and so on.1 2. 3. 4. 5 6. 7. 8. 9 10. 答案：1.an2.causing3.of4.goes5.what6.their7to attend8.especially9.be treated10.ToastsTraditional Chinese wedding customs are considered as an important part of traditional Chinese ritual culture. A wedding is usually a grand occasion with elaborate formalities. 中国的婚礼习俗是中国传统礼仪文化的重要部分。中式婚礼场面正式隆重。