1、写作-求助信一推荐信结构第一段:询问对方情况,表明写信目的,请求帮助。第二段:要清晰陈述请求帮助的具体内容。第三段:希望得到帮助。注意语气委婉、真诚,并要向收信人表示感谢。经典表达方式我叫.,来自.的一个高三学生。我在.方面遇到困难。(听说你在这方面有经验),我写信向你求助。1. My name is.a Senior Three Student from.I have some difficulty/trouble in (doing) sth.(Hearing you have much experience in.,)Im writing to you for some help.你好吗
2、?我写信向你求助,我想知道我怎样能.我在.方面一直有问题,这些问题一直困扰着我。2. How are you doing? Im writing to you to ask(seek) for some help. I would like to know how I can. I have been having some problems with., which trouble me a lot.首先,.更糟糕的是,.而且,.3. First,. Whats worse(To make matters worse/worse still,).In the meanwhile /In ad
3、dition,.我总是担心.结果我不能否.这(引起的问题)4. I am always worried about my. so that I cant., which.最困扰我的是.5. What troubles me most is that I.面对那么多的问题,我感到担心,希望你能帮助我。6. Facing those problems, I feel very anxious and I hope that you will be kind enough to help me.如果你面对这些问题,你会怎么做?你的任何建议会帮到我。7. If you are faced with t
4、hese problems, what would you do? Any advice will be a big help to me.我肯定/相信在你的帮助下我能(取得进步.)8. Im sure/convinced that with your help I can (make great progress in.)如果你能帮助我,我将感激不尽。9 I would be grateful if you could help me with my.我盼望着收到你的来信并提前感谢。10. Im looking forward to receiving your advice letter
5、and thank you in advance.3.建议信结构 Dear_,My name is_; I am writing to ask whether you could do me a favor.(表明自己的身份,提出写信的目的).I have had much difficulty/trouble in _(交待自己面临的困难). Besides, Im very upset that_(提出自己苦恼的问题). Whats more, I dont know _(进一步说明自己的困境). Would you like to be so kind as to _(请求对方帮助)?
6、In the meanwhile/At the same time, I beg you to _ so that_(再次请求对方的帮助).Id appreciate it if you could lend me a hand(表达得到对方帮助的感激). Im looking forward to your early reply. Yours sincerely,4. 真题例题分析假定你是李华,你正在为高考紧张复习,但最近你遇到了一些问题导致无法集中精力学习。于是你给你校的外籍心理老师Kate写一封求助信寻求帮助。要点如下: 1. 作业多,没有时间运动。 2. 压力大,难以入睡。 3. 希
7、望得到Kate的帮助。注意:1. 词数100左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。写作步骤一对题干进行要点编写:1._2. _3. _4. _写作步骤二对要点进行转述:1.我叫李华,是一名高三学生,正在忙着备战高考,但是发现很难集中精力学习,特此写信求助。I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, Ive been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exams, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to devote myse
8、lf to my study. So Im writing to ask you for help. _2.有些问题严重困扰了我。第一,作业太多,没有时间运动。Some problems have troubled me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. _3.再者,我越想老师和父母的殷切期望就越感压力沉重。Moreover, the more I think of the high expectation from the teac
9、hers and my parents, the more pressured I feel. 4.最让我头疼的是每晚都难以入睡。What troubles me most is that its difficult for me to fall asleep every night._5.面对以上所有这些问题,我急切想得到您的帮助,您能就如何解决这些问题给我提些建议吗?Faced with all the above, Im eager to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these
10、problems?6.期待尽早答复。Looking forward to your early reply.写作步骤三对转述要点汉译英经典范文抄写 Dear Kate, I am Li Hua, a Senior 3 student. Recently, Ive been busy preparing for my College Entrance Exams, but unfortunately I find it quite hard to devote myself to my study. So Im writing to ask you for help. Some problems
11、 have troubled me a lot. First, I have to spend so much time on my homework that I hardly have time to take sports. Moreover, the more I think of the high expectation from the teachers and my parents, the more pressured I feel. What troubles me most is that its difficult for me to fall asleep every night. Facing all the above, Im eager to get your help. Could you please offer me some advice on how to solve these problems? Yours sincerely, Li Hua