1、2021年高考英语应用文写作必备素材与核心句式集锦02观点与建议【真题再现1】（2020年，天津卷，第二次高考）假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像)；(2)对活动的感受；(3)对自己未来的展望。注意:(1)词数不少于100；(2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行方连贯；(3)开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇:成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony 新冠脑炎 COVID-F9Dear Chris,
2、Im so glad to hear from you._Yours,Li Jin参考范文Dear Chris,I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had expe
3、rienced. After that, we all watched the video of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I wi
4、ll be a good doctor to heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.Best wishes！Yours,Li Jin写作分析这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。第一步:审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，假如你是晨光中学的李津。你校于6月8号举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris 很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris 回一封电子邮件，介绍相关情况，内容包括:(1)成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)2. 对活动的感受。3. 对自己未来
5、的展望。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步:布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段:成人礼活动内容(成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等)。第二段:对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段，表达期望。第三步:确定关键词汇和短语:congratulate sb on sth., be faced with, heal the wounded and rescue the dying, devote oneself to doing sth.；第四步:确定较为高级的句子:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During
6、the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced wit
7、h the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.第五步:连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:After that, besides, however.第六步:注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。范文点评文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing t
8、he growth period that we had experienced. that引导的表语从句Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.时间状语从句的省略句When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。【真题再现2】
9、（2014安徽卷）为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。注意：1.词数120左右；2.信中不能出现与本人相关的信息；3.信的开头与结尾已为你拟好，不计入总词数。参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪Hi Worried，Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad tim
10、e at the moment. Yours,Jamie参考范文Hi Worried， Im sorry to know that youre having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you dont have to worry so much. The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may n
11、ot do or say anything youll regret. Here are three useful tips: First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. Second, go outdoors and play team games with your friends，as physical exercise is an effective way to
12、get rid of anger .And third, remain optimistic about your future. Such a positive attitude towards life can be helpful in lifting your spirits. I hope youll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal.Yours,Jamie写作分析本篇书面表达属于提纲作文。内容是用英文写一封回信。写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示：为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设
13、你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信。内容要点如下：1.表示理解并给予安慰；2.提出建议并说明理由。弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确要点就是主要内容。2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象。要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写。本文写作时可以按照提示的3个方面的内容进行介绍。3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时为主。4.注意写信格式。范文点评文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为
14、高级的句式: that引导的宾语从句Im sorry to know that youre having such a had time at the moment.定语从句sothat 引导的目的状语从句The important thing is to learn to control your temper so that you may not do or say anything youll regret.高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。【经典演练】随着智能手机以及电脑的普及,人们越来越喜欢自拍，然后将自拍照上传到社交网站上和朋友分享。请结合
15、下面的提示,以“Why do People Like Selfie?为题写一篇文章，向某英文报刊投稿。内包括：1.自拍的现状(人群、特点)；2.说明自己的情况；3.分析这种现象的原因。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。高分范文Why do People Like Selfie?With easier access to smartphones as well as computers, selfie has become more and more popular among people recently. With regard to this phenomeno
16、n, my opinions are as follows.To start with, if you are a teenager who loves taking selfies, it cant be denied that you are following the trend. Besides, it is the younger generation that accounts for the majority of selfie lovers. Equipped with modern devices, they always have new ideas and tend to
17、 be self-centered. However, it is a pity that I have never tried taking a selfie before, but as a teenager, I can still understand their feelings.To conclude,it is reasonable for them to appreciate themselves with the coming of smartphones. More importantly, taking selfies and posting therm online i
18、s really convenient and amusing.句子改写用what引导的从句改写范文划线的句子Whats more important is that taking selfies and posting them online is really convenient and amusing.佳句临摹佳句1;. it cant be denied that you are following the trend.临摹1:不可否认他是最伟大的科学家之一。It cant be denied that he is one of the greatest scientists.佳句2
19、:. it is a pity that I have never tried taking a selfie before.临摹2:非常遗憾我没能参加你的生日晚会。 It is a pity that I didnt attend your birthday party.【写作宝典】1.提出建议套语我建议Id like to suggest thatMay I suggest that?In my opinionI would like to make a recommendation thatI am writing to adviseIf I were you, I would2.希望采
20、纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复的套语（1）I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成).我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。（2） I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember:The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”).我希望这
21、些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。（3）Best wishes!（给你）最美好的祝愿！（4）I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway.I would be more than happy to see improvement.无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。（5）I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account.Whatever you decide to do, good luck wit
22、h your studies/work！我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。（6） I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know.我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。【素材集锦】常用词语more importantly 更重要的是am concerned依我看last but not least最后但同样重要的to start with/first of all首
23、先compared with. .相比较as a saying goes俗话说from my point of view/in my view/as far as I as we all know/as is known to us众所周知常用句子1. The more. the more.越.越.2. When it comes to.当涉.时3. There is ( no) need possibility/ chance.有(没有)必要/可能.4. There is no doubt that.毫无疑问.5. People have different opinions on this
24、 problem.关于这个问题，人们有不同的观点。6. People take different views on this problem.关于这个问题，人们有不同的看法。7. Opinions are divided on this problem.关于这个问题,人们的观点有分歧。8. Different people hold different opinions.不同的人持有不同的观点。9. People have taken different attitudes towards.对.人们持有不同的态度。10. Some of them are in favor of the id
25、ea that. .他们中的一些人赞.想法。11. Most of them are in favor of the idea that. . 他们中的大部分人赞.想法。.12. People who are for the idea think.赞成这种观点的人认为.13. People who are against it dont think so.反对这种观点的人不这么认为。14. On the other hand, people think.另方面，人们认为.15. However. of them hold a different view.但是，他们中的.人持有不同的观点。16
26、. However,. of them hold the opposite opinion.但是，他们中的.人持有相反的观点。17. Opinions vary from person to person at present.目前人们的观点都不相同。18. Though each coin has two sides, 1 approve of the former.虽然事物都有两面性，但我还是赞成前者。9. There is no doubt that a green campus plays an important role in the physical and mental gro
27、wth of each student.毫无疑问，一个绿色的校园对每个学生的身心成长来说都是极其重要的。20. To my mind, making regulations and rules on campus should be the first measure we must take to ensure we students behave ourselves.依我看，制定校园管理条例应该是我们必须采取的第一步措施，以确保我们学生 表现得体。21.I hold the view that if we students want to know as many great works
28、of literature as we can, we had better see the film.我认为我们学生如果想尽可能多地了解伟大的文学作品，最好还是看电影。22. Meanwhile, people should be encouraged to replace them with environmentally friendly paper bags or cloth ones.与此同时，应该鼓励人们用环保纸袋或布袋取代它们。23. As far as Im concerned, Im in favor of this reform.就我而言，我支持这项改革。24. Perso
29、nally, I prefer to work in a team, which offers me a chance to learn how to get along with others and how to share my experience with them.就我个人而言,我宁愿以团队的方式来工作,这给我提供了一个机会，学习如何与人相处，如何与他们分享我的经验。25. Different from those.，some people think.不同于那些. ,有些人认为.26. The purpose of the picture is to show us that.这
30、张图片是用来向我们说明.27. We can deduce from this picture that.从这幅图我们可以推断.28. The picture indicates/ conveys the meaning that.这幅图表达的意思.29. It seems to me that the cartoonist is sending a message about.似乎漫画家在传递一一个 .的信息。30. More and more people have come to realize. .越来越多的人开始意识到.31. Now it is commonly held that
31、.现在人们普遍认为.32. As is shown in the picture, we can see clearly the relationship between.正如画面上显示的那样，我们能清楚地看到.的关系。33. Anyone with the least common sense knows that our environment should be taken good care of.that引导宾语从句任何稍有常识的人都知道我们应该好好保护环境。34. No easy method can be at hand to solve the problem of pollu
32、tion but the common recognition of the necessity of controlling the pollution might be the first step towards change in the right direction.解决污染问题目前还没有简单的办法,但人们普遍意识到控制污染的必要性是朝着正确方向改进的第一步。35. If such measures were not taken, the problem of environmental pollution would be more serious. 虚拟语气，表示与将来事实相反
33、的假设如果不采取这类措施环境污染的问题将会更加严重。36. Another reason why I dispute the above statement is that. .why引导定语从句我不同意上述说法的另一个原因是.37. Unless there is a common realization of the importance of protecting the environment, it is very likely that our efforts will be of no use.除非大家都意识到了保护环境的重要性，否则，很有可能我们的努力将付诸东流。38. Som
34、e are in favor of it, holding the view that it can solve the problem of crowdedness.有些人赞成它,认为它能够解决拥堵的问题。39. The budget is too large, yet it can hardly make any profit in the short run.预算太大,然而在短期内几乎不可能产生利润。40. Nowadays people are so busy that it seems impossible for them to spare time to preparea mea
35、l at home.现在人们太忙，以至于他们似乎抽不出时间在家准备顿饭。41. However, we have a good many reasons to enjoy home-cooked meals with our family members.然而，我们有很多的理由与家人一起享受家里做的饭。42. Finally, it is generally acknowledged that home is a more relaxing place to have meals.最终，人们取得了一致看法:家是吃饭更放松的地方。43. All in all, eating at home is
36、 much better than eating outside, which is much healthier at the same time.which引导非限制性定语从句总之，在家吃饭比在外面吃饭要好得多，同时也健康得多。44. Some of us think that it is better to see the film than to read the book in the original.我们中的一些人认为,看电影比看原著要好。45. On the one hand, they believe that they can understand literature i
37、n a short time by seeing the film and it is usually more interesting to see the performers act the film than just to read the original book.一方面，他们认为通过看电影他们能够在短时间内理解文学作品，而且看到演员表演比阅读原著更有趣。46. On the other hand, they will get to know the spirit of the book easily by seeing the film.另一方面，通过看电影他们将会很容易地了解
38、这本书的基本精神。47. Only in this way can we keep our earth clean.“only +介词短语”位于句首时，句子要用部分倒装结构只有用这种方式我们才能够使地球保持整洁。48. However, quite a few people object to the move.然而，相当多的人反对这一行动。49. Besides, we should support these new reforms even if they are not mature.而且，我们应该支持这些新举措，即使它们还不成熟。50. Not taking the children
39、s interest into account, some parents force their children to make the choice as their will, which troubles many students.不考虑孩子的利益，有些父母按照自己的意愿强迫孩子作出选择，这令许多学生苦恼。51. But when it comes to making choices, we are the ones who must live with our choices.但是当涉及作决定时，我们必须自已作出决定。52. On the other hand, the parents should try to help children make the best possible decisions, instead of forcing them to do something against their will.另一方面,父母应该尽力帮助孩子作出尽可能是最佳的选择，而不是强迫他们违背他们的意愿来作出他们的选择。