1、Section_Writing_写给笔友的信一、基本结构第一部分,呼应来信、介绍现状。第二部分,回答问题或叙述经过。第三部分,提出愿望。二、增分佳句(一)书信的开头常用句式1Thank you for your last letter asking about .2Im very glad to tell you what you have always hoped/what you asked me.(二)书信的主体常用句式1I would like to be a volunteer, for I will be free during the summer holidays.这个暑假我有
2、空,想成为一名志愿者。2I am good at spoken English; as a result, I won the first prize in an English Speech Contest in our school last year.我擅长英语口语,结果,我去年在我们学校举行的英语演讲比赛中获得一等奖。3I hope to learn more about society and improve my communication skills by being a volunteer; meanwhile I can help visitors know more ab
3、out Chinese culture.我希望更多地了解社会,通过志愿者服务提高我的交流技巧,同时我可以帮助游客知道更多的中国文化。4In your spare time, you can enjoy yourself in many places.闲暇之余,你可以有很多地方休闲娱乐。(三)书信的结尾常用句式1Best wishes/regards to you!2Good luck to you!3Please give my best wishes to .4Looking forward to hearing from you!题目要求假如你是李华,请根据下面提示给你的笔友John写一封
4、信件,介绍你的海外留学过程。注意:1.词数100左右;2信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear John,Thank you for your letter dated September 12. Looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua第一步:审题构思很关键一、审题1确定体裁:本文为书信;2确定人称:本文的主要人称应为第一人称;3确定时态:主要使用一般过去时和一般现在时。二、构思第一部分,介绍现状秘鲁一家大学攻读学士学位。第二部分,叙述经过签证、适应、学习等。第三部分,提出愿望。第二步:核心词汇想周全1spend_some_time_(in
5、)_doing_sth.花费时间做某事2make_full_preparations 做了充分的准备3adjust_to_ 适应4settle_in 安顿5be_occupied_with_. 忙于6put_forward 提出7keep_it_up_ 保持下去;保持优秀成绩第三步:由词扩句雏形现1现在我在秘鲁的一所大学里为我的学士学位而学习。Now Im_studying in a university in Peru for my bachelors degree.2离开我的祖国前,我花了大量时间排队得到我的签证。Before I left my motherland, I had_spe
6、nt_much_time_queuing to get my visa.3虽然我为新生活做了充分的准备,但刚开始我还是不适应。Although I_had_made_full_preparations for my new life, I didnt adjust_to it at first.4后来,我逐渐地适应了那里的日常生活。Later, I gradually fit_in_with_the_routine of life there.5为了提高学习,我的朋友建议我住在当地人家里。 To improve my study, my friend recommended that I_(s
7、hould)_live_in_a_local_family.6当我在我的新家安顿好以后,我就忙于自己的学业功课。After I_settled_in_my_new_home,_I was_occupied_with my subject.7我的导师是一个很严格的教授,他提出很多要求。My tutor is_a_strict_professor,_and he put_forward many requirements.第四步:句式升级造亮点1用不定式作目的状语改写句1Now_Im_studying_in_a_university_in_Peru_to_receive_my_bachelors_
8、degree.2用介词before改写句2Before_leaving_my_motherland,_I_had_spent_much_time_queuing_to_get_my_visa.3用非谓语作让步状语改写句3Having_made_full_preparations_for_my_new_life,_I_didnt_adjust_to_it_at_first.4用recommend sb.to do sth.改写句5To_improve_my_study,_my_friend_recommended_me_to_live_in_a_local_family.5用非谓语作时间状语改写
9、句6Having_settled_in_my_new_home,_I_was_occupied_with_my_subject.6用非谓语作状语改写句7Being_a_strict_professor,_my_tutor_put_forward_many_requirements.第五步:过渡衔接联成篇Dear John,Thank you for your letter dated September 12.Now_Im_studying_in_a_university_in_Peru_to_receive_my_bachelors_degree.Before_leaving_my_moth
10、erland,_I_had_spent_much_time_queuing_to_get_my_visa.Having_made_full_preparations_for_my_new_life,_I_didnt_adjust_to_it_at_first.Later,_I_gradually_fit_in_with_the_routine_of_life_there.To_improve_my_study,_my_friend_recommended_me_to_live_in_a_local_family.In_this_way,_I_can_improve_my_study.Having_settled_in_my_new_home,_I_was_occupied_with_my_subject.Being_a_strict_professor,_my_tutor_put_forward_many_requirements.Now_I_do_well_in_my_subject_and_I_will_keep_it_up.Looking forward to your reply.Yours, Li Hua