1、35分写作规范抢分练(五). 短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文, 请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误, 每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在其下面写出该加的词。删除: 把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改: 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意: 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词; 2. 只允许修改10处, 多者(从第11处起)不计分。I was often troubled by lack of confidences. So I applied for a job at an ex
2、hibition as reporter last term. The exhibition was held annual to display the latest products in the field of education. At that time, I was responsible for interview parents who bought the learning tools. While talking with him, I found it was not so hard as I think. One lady even praised me but as
3、ked her son to learn from me. I found nothing was more excited than communicating with people. From where I have experienced, I am fully aware of that we should take real action if our personality needs improving. 答案: 1. 【解析】第一句confidencesconfidence。考查名词。confidence是不可数名词。2. 【解析】第二句在reporter前加a。考查冠词。
4、根据句意, “我”去应聘当一名记者, 故应说as a reporter。3. 【解析】第三句annualannually。考查副词。这里的annually修饰动词held, 表示“每年举办”。4. 【解析】第四句interviewinterviewing。考查非谓语动词。短语be responsible for doing sth. , 故将interview改为interviewing。可能有人将interview当名词使用, 在其前加an, 但interview后面带有宾语, 所以interview在本句应该作动词使用。5. 【解析】第五句himthem。考查代词。根据前文I was re
5、sponsible for interviewing parents who bought the learning tools. 可知应该用them代替parents, 故将him改为them。6. 【解析】第五句thinkthought。考查动词的时态。根据本句的I found it was not so hard. . . 可知这里谈的是过去的事情, 故将think改为thought。7. 【解析】第六句butand。考查连词。本句前半部分说一位女士表扬了“我”, 后半部分说她叫她的儿子向“我”学习, 根据上下文的逻辑关系, 这里应是并列关系, 故将but改为and。8. 【解析】第七句
6、excitedexciting。考查形容词。从句的主语是nothing, 故将excited改为exciting, 表示“令人激动的”。9. 【解析】第八句wherewhat。考查宾语从句。from后面接的是宾语从句, 该从句中have experienced缺少宾语, 故将where改为what。10. 【解析】第八句去掉of。考查句式结构。be aware of后接名词或动名词。be aware that后加从句, 表示“明白”, 此处的介词of多余, 故要去掉。. 书面表达假设你叫李华, 高考过后计划暑假期间到美国去参加中美学生交流活动。请写一封咨询信, 询问相关事宜。内容包括: (1)
7、对申请者的相关要求; (2)课程的相关事宜; (3)住宿和吃饭的条件; (4)需要做的相关准备。注意: 信的开头与结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。要求: 词数100个左右: 可根据内容要点适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。Dear Sir or Madam, _Thanks again for your time, and Im looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam, Thank you for reading my letter. I am very interes
8、ted in the exchange program you offered. I am writing to obtain some more detailed information about it. Firstly, I just graduated from an ordinary high school and I wonder what qualifications are required for applicants. Secondly, if admitted, what courses am I going to take, and do I need to buy a
9、ny books ahead of time? In addition, would you be so kind to introduce to me the conditions of board and accommodations? By the way, if I need to make any other preparations, let me know, will you? Thanks again for your time, and Im looking forward to your early reply. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua关闭Word文档返回原板块
