1、陕西省太原市2014高考英语短文改错学生自练（8）及答案4.短文改错This morning on my way school I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old manwas counting his money in the front of the bank while suddenly a young man came runningand knocked her down. To make things worse, his money was lying in all direction. In notime
2、the people around rush to pick the money up while the old man stood here, not knowwhat to do. Surprisingly, everyone gave back the money they had just picked up. The oldman counted the money again and found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy,there are now a lot of nice people in our
3、life. Its true that honesty is more important than money!【参考答案】4.短文改错This morning on my wayschool I was deep moved by what I saw outside a bank. An old man 加to deeplywas counting his money in the front of the bank while suddenly a young man came running 去掉 whenand knocked her down. To make things wo
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5、 found that not a single bill was missed. To my great joy, missingthere are now a lot of nice people in our life. Its true that honesty is more important than money!passage *Dear doctor,My name is Wang Lin. Im a middle school student.I havea problem and Im writing to ask you for some advices. 1._Im
6、just 1.57 meters high, and my weight is 71 kilos.Many 2._Students often make fun me.Some boys are unfriendly to me. 3._ They called me “ Meat Ball”. That makes me feel unhappy. 4._Im now worry about my weight. Though I am a bit too fat, I 5._feel rather good. I enjoy my meals. I love eating meat ver
7、y 6._much. And I like sweet food, either. I often have sugar with 7._tea, milk, porridge, and even hot water. In the past two months 8._I have put off 5 kilos. Im worried about this problem, 9._but I dont know what to lose weight quickly. Please help me, 10_dear doctor!I hope to hear from you as soo
8、n as possible.With best wishes, Wang Lin【参考答案】Key 91 advices advice 2 andbut 3of 4 called call 5 worryworried 6 good well 7 either too 8 right 9 off on 10 what how短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）该文中共有十处错误,每句中最多有两处,错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(), 并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（ ）划掉。 修改： 在错的词下划一横线, 并在该词下面写出修改后
9、的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改十处, 多者(从第11处起) 不计分。I like eating fruit and vegetables what are of great benefit to our healthy. Not only do they prevent us from falling into ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow the doctors advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. J
10、ust as an old saying going, “An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike fruit and vegetables. On contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many were crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting stro
11、ng. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.【答案】I like eating fruit and vegetables what （改为which/that）are of great benefit to our healthy（改为health）. Not only do they prevent us from falling into（去掉into） ill, but they help us lose weight. I used to hate vegetables, but follow（改为following） t
12、he doctors advice, I gradually kicked the bad habit. Just as an old saying going（改为goes）, “ An apple a day keeps the doctor away”. However, there are still many children dislike（改为disliking或在dislike前加who） fruit and vegetables. On（加the） contrary, influenced by this or that kind of advertisement, many
13、 were（改为are） crazy about junk food. Consequently, they become weaker and weaker instead of getting strong（改为 stronger）. In my opinion, we must take action to change them.（改为 it） 5.短文改错下面短文中有10处错误, ,请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面加上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误
14、及其修改仅限一词；2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their parents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to find part-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a s
15、cholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay half of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time job by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as Im very good at these impor
16、tant subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can easily win a scholarship.【参考答案】5.短文改错College students have a little ways to pay their college fees. Many students have their fewparents to pay the fees. Some students may apply to a bank loan and others will try to f
17、ind forpart-time jobs in and out of the campus. Apart from this, many good student can win a studentsscholarship. By this way they can pay at least part of the fees. As to me, I will let my parents pay Inhalf of their fees because they are rich enough. Beside my study, I will take up a part-time my
18、not Besidesjob by teach some high school students math, physics, chemistry and English, as Im very good teachingat these important subjects. Of course I will also work very hard at my lessons in order to I can thateasily win a scholarship.6.短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。
19、错误涉及一个单词的增加，删除或修改。增加: 在缺词处加一个漏子符号（）并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用（）划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起 ）不计分。 Exams have both advantages and disadvantages .As for students , they can find out shortcomings in their study and became aware of their present level in a whole clas
20、s . The results of tests also help student work hard for better grades in the College Entrance Exams .And too frequent exams may result in problems . Students may have severe competition over scores and no longer be as friend as before . As for teachers ,while they can see clearly how their students
21、 master the knowledge .They suffer a lot either .It is easy work to design a good test paper ,to grade and to analyzing the students answers .Tests are exams for teachers and students .Only by giving and taking them properly can it be good for students .【参考答案】6.短文改错Exams have both advantages and dis
22、advantages .As for students , they can find out shortcomings in their study and became aware of their present level in a whole class . become theThe results of tests also help student work hard for better grades in the College Entrance studentsExams .And too frequent exams may result in problems . S
23、tudents may have severe Butcompetition over scores and no longer be as friend as before . As for teachers ,while friendlythey can see clearly how their students master the knowledge .They suffer a lot either . tooIt iseasy work to design a good test paper ,to grade and to analyzing the students answ
24、ers . no analyzeTests are exams for teachers and students .Only by giving and taking them properly can it be good for students .they (201*唐山联考)When I was a child, my mom was pushed me to study hard，1._hoping I could get a chance to go to college. I experience2._pressure for the first time. I did tha
25、t my mom expected3._because I didnt want to let her off. I was born to a poor4._peasant family, but I really knew life was not easy. All the5._things my mother did was the result of her hope that I could6._lead better life in the future. As the saying goes, “No pains7._no gains.”I was finally able t
26、o meet my mother expectations and8._have a chance to go to college. Thanks to my mothers push and the 9._pressure, I made it. Now, I no longer think pressure is a good thing.10._ 答案与解析：1去掉第二个was此处不用被动语态，故was多余。2experienceexperienced此处应用一般过去时态，与全文时态保持一致。3thatwhat这里用what引导宾语从句并在从句中作宾语，that没有这种用法。4offd
27、own结合上下文可知此处意为“我不想让她失望”，故应用let sb. down表示“让某人失望”。5butand或so此处应为顺承关系而非转折关系，故将but改为and或so。6waswere此处主语为all the things，故应用were。 7better前加alead a better life表示“过一种更好的生活”。8mothermothers此处表示“达到了妈妈的期望”，故应用其所有格形式。910goodbad根据上文可知此处是指“我不再认为压力是一件坏事”，故应将good改为bad。【短文改错专题训练与高考预测】此题要求改正所给短文中的错误对标有题号的每一行做出判断，如无错误
28、，在刻行右边横线上画一个勾（）；如有错误（每行只有一个错误），则按下列情况改正；该行多一个词：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉，在该行在边横线上写出该词，并也用斜线划掉。该行缺一词：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。该行错一个词：在错的词下面划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词注意：原行没能错的不要改Passage 1 Miss ChinaGuan Qi, a 21-years-old college student from Jilin 1._ Province, had won the Miss China 2003 beauty pageant 2._ in Sany
29、a, Hainan Province, on September 21. 3._ Besides judged on their looks, the 32 competitors 4._ were tested on their write ability, English skills, 5._ team-work and generally knowledge. Miss Guan Qi 6._ impressed the judges who present with her excellent 7._ replies during the question or answer sec
30、tion. She will 8._ represent(代表) Chinese in the final of Miss World 9._ to be holding in Sanya on December 6. 10._ KEY:11. 21-years-old -21-year-old 2. had won -won3. 4. judged- being 5. written- writing 6. generally- general 7.去掉 who 或 who -were 8. or -and 9. Chinese- China 10. holding- held(201*保定
31、调研)Last Sunday I went to the Birds Nest Stadium. At gate1._I happened to meet some young America tourists.I greeted2._to them in English and then we began to chat. From the chat3._I learned that they were college students traveling in Beijing4._but most of them were fond of Chinese culture. They wer
32、e5._busy taking pictures and they seem to be much impressed by6._the changes which had been taken place in the past few years.7._After come out of the Stadium, we went to the Water Cubic(水立方)8._and had a good time there. We exchanged our email address so that9._ we could write to each other later. T
33、hey thanked us again and again.10._I was very glad to have the chance to practise my oral English.答案与解析：1gate前加the此处表示特指，指的是鸟巢体育馆的大门。 2AmericaAmerican应该用形容词来修饰名词。3去掉第一个togreet是及物动词，可直接加宾语，不必加to。45butand来北京和喜欢中国文化为并列关系而非转折，应用and表示并列。6seemseemed根据事情发生的时间last Sunday和全文的时态可知，此处也应用一般过去时。7去掉beentake place无被动语态。8comecoming介词after后要用动名词形式。9addressaddresses交换的是双方的邮箱地址，故此处应用复数形式。10usme是“我”帮助了他们，因此用me。
