1、写作任务: 假如你是某双语学校学生会主席,你校学生会要举办一场主题为比比谁更原创的英语短剧节,定于六月五号下午两点将在你校大礼堂进行海选(first audition),参选人员需要在六月一号前将原创剧本交至学生会。请你根据相关活动信息,为这次英语短剧节写一则英语书面通知。写作要求:1.内容完整充实,语言连贯通顺;2.词数:100左右。写作分析:第一步,认真审题,提炼要点。 一审体裁:本次写作任务要求写一则关于举办英语短剧节的通知,属于应用文写作。通知是我们经常在学校和公共场所见到的一种应用文,主要用于传达指示、要求或信息,是传递信息最直接、表达含义最简洁的写作形式。 二审结构:通知主要包括标
2、题、正文、发出通知的单位和时间。通知常用notice作标题,写在正文上方正中位置。为了醒目起见,标题的每个字母可以都用大写。在正文部分,需要介绍通知的相关内容,可以从四个方面展开叙述。首先,介绍举办此次英语短剧节的目的和主题。其次,写明通知的对象以及活动要求,比如对象是学生,活动要求是参选人员必须在规定日期内向学生会递交原创剧本等。接下来要介绍活动内容,例如举办短剧节之前有海选,一定要交代清楚活动举行的日期和地点。最后向广大学生发出邀请。最后,标明发出通知的单位名称和时间。单位名称一般写在正文的右下方,时间写在单位名称的左下角。 三审要点:用英语思维,理出写作要点1. improve writ
3、ten English 2. creative potential3. English Short Play Festival 4. Who Is More Original?5. first audition6. original play script7. audition results第二步,紧扣主题,扩点成句。1. The festival can improve students written English. 2. The festival can develop students creative potential. 3. The Students Union will h
4、old an English Short Play Festival.4. The festival is entitled Who Is More Original?5. There is a first audition.6. Students should present an original play script.7. The audition results will be released in a week.第三步,补充修改,连句成篇。范文1:NOTICEIn order to improve students written English and develop thei
5、r creative potential, the Students Union will hold an English Short Play Festival entitled Who Is More Original? All the students who are interested in this festival should present your original play script to the Students Union before June 1st. In addition, before the opening of the festival, a fir
6、st audition aimed to select the finalists will be held in the school hall at 2 pm on June 5th. The audition results will be released in a week. All students are welcome and your inspiration will brighten up all of us!Students UnionApril 22th, 2011亮点展示:1. 开门见山地点明活动的意义:In order to improve studentswrit
7、ten English and develop their creative potential, .2. 文章条理清晰,层次鲜明,先介绍活动要求,然后描述活动内容:All the students who are interested in this festival should present your original play script ., before the opening of the festival, a first audition .3. 段尾最后一句All students are welcome and your inspiration will bright
8、en up all of us!富有号召力。范文2:NOTICEThe Students Union will hold an English Short Play Festival in an attempt to inspire students creative spirit and make school life more interesting. The theme of the festival is Who Is More Original? Students who want to participate in the festival are supposed to han
9、d in an original play script to the Students Union before June 1st. Besides this, there will also be a first audition before the opening of the festival to select the finalists. The audition will take place in the school hall at 2 pm on June 5th. The list of the finalists will be issued the followin
10、g week. Every one is welcome to take part in the festival.Students Union April 22th , 2011亮点展示:1. 首句用凝练的语言表达通知的目的,言简意赅:Students Union will hold an English Short Play Festival in an attempt to inspire students creative spirit .2. 语言表达丰富多样,使文章富有文采:in an attempt to / participate in / be supposed to等。3.
11、 用一句定语从句提出对参选人员的要求,信息全面:Students who want to participate in the festival are supposed to hand in an original play script to the Students Union before June 1st.Powerful Sentences:1. The English Short Play Festival aims at lighting the creative spark among students.2. Students will benefit from the ac
12、tivity in terms of fully exercising their writing potential.3. The original play script must be turned in to the Students Union before the deadline.4. Candidates who can enter the final competition must have a great performance in the first audition.5. Gold will shine everywhere. We are expecting yo
13、ur participation.巩固练习: 为帮助同学们了解外国学生的校园生活,你校准备举办一场主题为我的学校生活的演讲活动,由英国留学生Lisa和美国留学生Michelle根据她们各自国家学生的学习和课余生活情况分别做一场演讲。假设你是校学生会的负责人,请你根据这次活动内容,写一则英语书面通知。词数:100左右。参考范文:NOTICEThe cultural differences between China and foreign countries are displayed in many aspects including campus life. In order to help
14、 Chinese students have good understanding of foreign students lives, the Students Union will invite two foreign students to make speeches about students school lives in their countries. One student is Lisa, from Britain. She will introduce British students study life. The other student is an American girl called Michelle. She will lecture on American students extracurricular activities. Their speeches will be given in our school hall on May 16th. There is no limit to the number of people who can attend, and all students are welcome.Students UnionMay 1st