1、D单元短文改错 目录D单元短文改错1D1 短文改错记叙文1D2 短文改错应用文6D3 短文改错议论文6D4短文改错说明文6D1 短文改错记叙文【英语卷（解析）2015届河北省邯郸市高三1月质检（201501）word版】第一节 短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及
2、其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Mike,How are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was stayed in Sydney last summer vacation. You were so kindly and friendly to treat me to the local food, and take us to do a lot of sightseeing. Its really nice to visit Sydney, which bea
3、utiful scenery and delicious food gave me a better impression. I have a great time here and learned a lot about Sydney. Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invite you visit China. Ill act like a guide to show you around the places of interests in my hometown. Yours, Li Hua【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错
4、记叙文【答案解析】第一行：去掉was；stay是不及物动词，不能用被动；第二行：kindly改为kind，用形容词做表语；us改为me，逻辑错误，前文是me；第三行：which改为whose，此处引导词做定语，后面名词与先行词Sydney是所有格关系，故用whose；第四行：better该为good，此处不是比较级，用形容词原级作定语； have改为had，与learned并列，用一般过去时态；here改为there，根据句意应当是表示在悉尼玩的高兴，所以应当是表示在那儿，所以用there。第五行：visit前加to，invite sb to do sth，邀请某人做某事，固定短语；like改
5、为 as，作为一名导游，as表示“作为”。第六行：interests改为interest，place of interest的复数形式只改变place，其他不变。【英语卷（解析）2015届河北省衡水市冀州中学高三上学期第四次月考（201501）】第二节 短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分) 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（/），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的
6、词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Ten years ago, I had worked as a night guard in a factory. On a rainy night, all the lights of factory went out all of a sudden. I rushed out and could see nothing. Lucky for me, the warning system was directly connected with the police station. Three
7、 or four minutes late, four police car arrived at the front gate. They searched for the factory carefully, tried to find something unusual. In the end, I am told that the rain had brought aboutthe short circuit, that caused the accident.【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文【文章综述】 本文讲述十年前我在一个工厂做夜班守卫时发生的故事； 【答案解析】81 去掉
8、had 考查动词的时态。根据前面的时间状语，说明只有过去时82.of后面加the 考查冠词；特指factory，故使用the83.and改成but 考查连词。上下文是转折关系，故使用but84.lucky改成luckily 考查副词。用副词做状语，修饰整个句子85.late改成later 考查副词。later放在一段时间的后面86.car改成cars 考查名词。根据上文的four说明使用复数形式87.去掉for 考查动词的用法。search可以作为及物动词search the place搜查某地88.tried 改成trying 考查非谓语动词。they与try构成主动关系，使用现在分词做状语
9、89. am改成was 考查动词的时态。本文使用一般过去时90.that改成which 考查定语从句；非限制性定语从句不能用that引导【英语卷（解析）2015届河北省衡水中学高三上学期第四次联考 （201501）】第二节：短文改错（共10小题；每题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
10、2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。My parents and I went to the park on last SundayThere were lots of visitors stood in front of the ticket window W e waited a long time and buy three ticketsIn the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps throug
11、h the crowd Unfortunate, I got separated from my parents I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luckWandering in the park, I felt alone without any companions Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】1. 删除on on Sunday 在星期天；las
12、t Sunday 上周天；这里讲的是上周天发生的事情。2.stoodstanding stand的逻辑主语是visitors, 故用standing，表进行。3.buy bought 描述过去发生的事情，用过去式。4.toso so.that结构5.frightenedfrightening 修饰人用frightened；这里修饰animals,修饰物用frightening。6.unfortunateunfortunately 副词放句首，表示强调。7.在had后面加上a have a good time 玩的开心，过得愉快8.himthem 代词代替上文的parents，用them。9.a
13、lonelonely fell lonely 感到孤独。10.coveredcovering cover v. 走过多少路程，cover的逻辑主语与主句的主语一致，故用covering表伴随。【英语卷（解析）2015届黑龙江省双鸭山一中高三上学期期末考试（201501）】第五部分 写作(共两节, 满分35分)第一节 短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉
14、。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。One night, I was on my home for my Christmas holiday when my car broke down. It was complete dead, and I was a few miles away from my home in that cold, wet night. I decided to walk around a little after accepting that Id have
15、to spend the night in the car. Maybe I can find a telephone. Actually, I didnt have to walk far before I found the small house standing in a field with a light shone from the sitting room. I knocked the door was delighted when a pleasant old man opened the door and listened to my story carefully. He
16、 said he had no telephone and that it wasnt any within walking distance, but the old man who offered to go to repair my car.【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】1. complete改为completely ，用副词作状语；2. in改为on， night前有定语时用介词on；否则用at；3. after后加before根据逻辑关系是在接受必须在车上度过之前，先转转看看。4. can改为could ，根据语境，此处应当是一般过去时态；5. the改为a in
17、 the field 在旷野中，固定短语；6. shone改为shining ，此处是with的复合结构，shine与light之间是主动关系，故应当用现在分词做宾补。 7. knocked后加at/ on ，敲门，knock是不及物动词，后加at或on。8. was前加and ，并列谓语动词。 9. it改为there ，there be句型；10. who删掉，前有but构成并列句，who多余，不能构成定语从句；【英语卷（解析）2015届山东省德州一中高三1月月考（201501）】第一节短文改错(共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写
18、的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意： 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。Trying to come to a decision complete on your own can be riskySome decisions are so important that they shouldnt made without talking to
19、 others firstThere have several advantages if you consult the persons you trustFor one thing，they can give you valuable advice and they may point out some things you may have been overlookedFor another，friends may stop you from make big mistakesWhen consulting others about importance decisions，you s
20、hould keep two things in mindThe first one is that you need to find someone whom you respected enough to trust their judgmentThe second thing to consider is how to do if you disagree with this personMaybe turning to a third or fourth person for help is the best optionIn a word，making any big decisio
21、n alone can lead in problemsTalking to friends or family members first are always a good idea【答案】【知识点】D1 短文改错记叙文【答案解析】第一行：complete改为completely，副词作状语修饰介词短语 on your own；第二行：made前加be，被动语态；have改为are ，there be 句型；第三行：无错误；第四行：去掉been，你所忽视的一些事情，some things you may have overlooked ，应当是主动。第五行：make改为making，介词后用动名词做宾语。第六行：importance改为important，形容词作定语，修饰名词decisions；第七行：respected改为respect，时态错误，前面是一般现在时，根据时态一致原则，这儿应当是一般现在时。第八行：how改为what ，what to do，do是及物动词，不定式前用关系代词做宾语；第十行：in改为to，lead to 固定搭配，导致；are改为is，动名词作主语用单数谓语动词。 D2 短文改错应用文D3 短文改错议论文D4短文改错说明文