1、写作任务: 在学校英语论坛上,你校学生就是否应上书法课展开激烈的争论。有人认为毛笔已经不再是主要书写工具,没有练习的必要;而其他人则认为毛笔作为中国传统文化的体现,应该受到重视。你对此有何看法?请你就此话题写篇文章,发表在校英语黑板报上。要求:1. 内容完整,结构合理;2. 词数:100-120。参考词汇:书法课calligraphy class写作分析:第一步,认真审题,提炼要点。 一审体裁:本次写作任务要求写一篇议论文。 二审结构:文章可分为三部分。首先,简述就是否应上书法课而展开讨论这一事件,以引出写作话题。接下来,客观介绍论坛上的两种看法。最后,明确表示自己对是否应上书法课的看法,赞成
2、什么、反对什么要讲清楚,不能含糊不清。 三审要点:用英语思维,理出写作要点。1. a heated discussion2. hold the view 3. an important instrument for writing4. a waste of time5. traditional Chinese art6. have calligraphy classes7. improve our handwriting第二步,紧扣主题,扩点成句。1. There was a heated discussion over whether the calligraphy class should
3、 be taught or not.2. The majority of the students hold the view that .3. The writing brush is no longer an important instrument for writing.4. It is a waste of time to practice it.5. The writing brush is a necessary part of traditional Chinese art.6. We should have calligraphy classes.7. Calligraphy
4、 classes will help us improve our handwriting.第三步,补充修改,连句成篇。范文一:Recently, there was a heated discussion over whether the calligraphy class should be taught or not.Opinions are varied. The majority of the students hold the view that theres no need to have the class. In their opinion, the writing brus
5、h is no longer an important instrument for writing. Since it is out of date, it is a waste of time to practice it. On the other hand, others believe that the writing brush, as a necessary part of traditional Chinese art, should not be ignored. Instead, great importance must be attached to it. As for
6、 me, Im firmly convinced that we should have calligraphy classes, which will not only help us improve our handwriting but will also be useful in promoting traditional Chinese art. By no means should it be ignored.亮点展示:1. 文章结构合理:首段点题,第二段介绍论坛上的观点,最后发表自己的看法;2. 词汇表达丰富多样,不落俗套: the majority of, in ones op
7、inion, attach importance to等;3. 倒装句By no means should it be ignored.画龙点睛,使文章句式多样。范文二:Recently the topic Should we have calligraphy classes? was discussed on the school English forum. Different people have different opinions on this topic. Some people insist that the writing brush is no longer an imp
8、ortant writing tool; hence, there is no need to practice how to use it. In contrast, others hold that calligraphy, which is very important in traditional Chinese art, should be paid special attention to. In my opinion, I believe that there is no need for calligraphy classes. Nowadays everything can
9、be done with computers, so if we can learn more about advanced technology, we will be better prepared for the future.亮点展示:1. 开篇即交代讨论的话题,开门见山,直截了当:Recently the topic Should we have calligraphy classes? was discussed .;2. 连接词使用恰当,使文章具有逻辑性:hence, in contrast, so;3. 最后一段发表自己的观点,并给出理由,具有说服力:In my opinion
10、, I believe that there is no need for . if we can learn more about advanced technology, we will be better prepared for the future.Powerful Sentences: 1. A great number of people think that the calligraphy class is unnecessary. 2. To sum up, I hold that the calligraphy class is a way to protect tradi
11、tional Chinese art.3. Opinions on calligraphy classes vary from person to person.4. Opinions can be divided into two groups. Some people believe that ., and others insist that .巩固练习: 你校英语沙龙正在就课外活动是否会对学业造成影响进行讨论,请你就此话题写篇文章,谈谈自己的看法,参与本次讨论。词数:100左右。参考范文:Nowadays, many schools hold out-of-class activiti
12、es. Whether they will have a negative effect on students school work is a question worthy of discussion.As far as I can see, the advantages of out-of-class activities far outweigh the disadvantages. Firstly, teenagers can keep fit by doing physical exercise. Furthermore, some time should be spent in
13、 helping students relax after class. Secondly, outdoor activities will enable students to communicate with each other, which may help them develop good interpersonal relationships. In summary, if every student can maintain a good balance between out-of- class activities and school work, they could benefit a lot from these activities.