1、2013届高考一轮复习浙江省高三上学期英语分类汇编六：短文改错一.（ 金华一中2012学年第一学期期中考试）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改l0处，多者(从第ll处起)不计分。例如： It was very nice to get your invitation to spend weekend with you. Luckily theI was completel
2、y free then, so Ill say yes. Ill arrive in Bristol at around 8 p. m. amon a Friday evening. Though great progress has been made in science these years, but thereare still many people livein poor conditions. They make their livingby collecting and selling used thing. Their children cannot go to schoo
3、lbecause they have not enough money to send their children to there. Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now? The answer lies on the population explosion. A presidentof a developing country once say: “It is us who are to blame forthe poverty because we used to produce children wit
4、hout limit.”Although this few words sound simple enough, they haveclear pointed out one of the causes of the population explosion.66.去掉but 67. lives-living 68. thing-things 69. 去掉第二个to 70. 在you前加do 71on-in 72. say - said 73. us-we 74. this-these 75. clear-clearly二、（浙江省北仑中学2012届高三上学期期中考试）文中共有10处语言错误，
5、要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1、每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2、只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Ask your friend that he can use a glass of water as a musical instrument. Of course, hecant. Then you take a glass of water. You put your finger in water and the
6、n move it slow roundthe rim of the glass, as shown in the picture. Your finger must not be much wet, but it must notbe dry. So you must try many time. At last you will hear clear music which comes from theglass. When your finger moves round the rim, it makes the glass to vibrate and the glass makes
7、amusical voice. The same principle makes the violin or its strings give music. The America scientist Benjamin Franklin made a musical instrument out of glass bowls. Heused the different principle.Ask your friend that he can use a glass of water as a musical instrument. Of course, he if / whethercant
8、. Then you take a glass of water. You put your finger in/water and then move it slow roundthe slowlythe rim of the glass, as shown in the picture. Your finger must not be much wet, but it must not very / toobe dry. So you must try many time. At last you will hear clear music which comes from the tim
9、esglass. When your finger moves round the rim, it makes the glass to vibrate and the glass makes a musical voice. The same principle makes the violin or its strings give music. sound andThe America scientist Benjamin Franklin made a musical instrument out of glass bowls. He Americanused the differen
10、t principle.same三、（浙江省苍南中学2012届高三上学期期中考试） 下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。 One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, I told that the ticke
11、t had all been sold out. Just then a man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent that he had a spare ticket. I didnt know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a while, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what shall I d
12、o? On a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to her, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me. 【改错】One day, I went to the railway station to buy a ticket to my aunt. When I got there, Itold that the for wasticket had all been sold out. Just then a
13、 man came up and said with a strongly Zhejiang accent tickets strongthat he had a spare ticket. I didnt know that if I could believe him or not. After hesitate for a 去掉 hesitatingwhile, I decided to take it. So as soon as the man left, I began to regret. If he was not honest, what Butshall I do? On
14、a third day, I went to the station to see my aunt away. As I was waving goodbye to should the offher, I saw the man sitting next to my aunt, smiling at me. 四、（浙江省慈溪市2012届高三上学期期中考试）下面的短文中共有10处语言错误，请你在错误的地方增加、删除或个性某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），在该行右边横线上写出该加的词。删除：在多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该行右边横线上写出改正后的词。注意：1每处
15、错误及其修改均仅限一词。2只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。Last Saturday the students of our class made a bike trip of Wanping, a small town by the Taihu Lake. We set off earlier in the morning. After getting to the town, we had visited some places of interest. At noon, we had picnic near the lake. Everybody was attracted
16、with the beautiful scenery and we took a lot of picture. In the afternoon, some of them went fishing, some flew kites, and the others rowed boats on the water. We both had a wonderful time! It was a pleasant trio fir us, during which the boys were offered the girls a lot of help. We have learned to
17、help, understand and sharing with others. In a word, we have got quite a lot from it.五、（浙江省杭州市七校2012届高三上学期期中联考）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意： 1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。例如：It was very nice to get your invi
18、tation to spend weekend with you. Luckily I was the am completely free then, so Ill to say “yes”. Ill arrive in Bristol at 8 pm in Friday evening. onI was frightening on my first day of classes at an American university. It was my first time to sit with so many Americans in a classroom. Unlike many
19、other classmate, I sat quietly by myself. My teacher spoke fast and I had a hard time understand him. English, without a doubt, is the hardest thing I experienced so far. Though Im a Chinese student, communicating fluently with Americans can be really difficulty. Therefore, I have to struggle to und
20、erstand that is being said in class. Reading and writing is equally as important as listening and speaking. When my classes started to get busy, the readings got longer. The papers also got harder, and thats when real disaster struck. longer. The papers also got harder, and thats when real disaster
21、struck.六、（萧山九中2011学年第一学期期中联考）下面短文中有10处语言错误。请再有错误的地方增加，删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写上该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Dear Sir/Madam,I learned from the newspaper that your company needs a English secretary. Im really interested in this po
22、sition and hoped I can work for you.Im 18 years old and will be graduated from Xinxing Foreign Language School this July. Im an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. Im good at English, specially spoken English. I often use the computer and I type very fast. On my spare time
23、, I read a lot of. Poems is my favorite. I enjoy music very much either. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. However, Im easy to get along and I like to make friends.Im looking forward to your reply.Li HuaDear Sir/Madam,来I learned from the newspaper that your company
24、needs a English secretary. Im anreally interested in this position and hoped I can work for you. hopeIm 18 years old and will be graduated from Xinxing Foreign Language School graduatingthis July. Im an excellent student, among the top 5 in my class of 50 students. Im good at English, specially spok
25、en English. I often use the computer and I type very especially来fast. On my spare time, I read a lot of. Poems is my favorite. I enjoy music very In 去掉 aremuch either. Being an active young person, I like sports and outdoor activities. tooHowever, Im easy to get along and I like to make friends.Besi
26、des withIm looking forward to your reply.Li Hua七、（浙江省南马高中2011-2012学年第一学期期中考试）假如英语课上老师要求同学们交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的一篇作文。文中共有10处语言错误，要求你在错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。增加：在缺词处加上一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。On Saturday afternoon, Li Hua and Wa
27、ng Ping, members from “ Green Eyes”, was having an environmental protection activity near the riverside when they catch sight of a bird on the ground.They picked it out and found it wounded. Thinking it might die without timely help, they took it to home. They made a nest for it but fed it with rice
28、 and water. Under their treatment and care, the lucky birds got recovered soon. When time came for them fly the bird back to nature, they felt a bit pity but very delighting. I think its worthwhile for him to do such a thing. Here I call on the public to show respect for nature. Only by changing the
29、 way we treat the environment can we get along good with it.四：改错：1. was-were 2. catch-caught 3. out-up 4. to home-home 5. but-and6. birds-bird 7. fly-to fly 8. delighting-delighted 9. him-them 10. good-well八、（衢州一中2011学年度第一学期期中检测试卷）下面短文中共有10处错误，错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（），并在此符号下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余
30、的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。It is important for everybody to obey traffic rules. This afternoon on my way to home from work, I saw an accident happening. A girl was crossing the street on a zebra crossing while a young man drove a motorbike towards
31、her. The young man saw the girl and tries to stop, and he drove too fast to stop. He hit the girl and fell off her motorbike. The girl was badly injured and couldnt move. The young man didnt know how to do. I immediately ran to a phone box nearby and dialed 110. Soon the police reached. They sent he
32、r hospital at once. One of the policeman talked to the young man and wrote something down while he was talking. I think it is very dangerous to drive very fast.to（去掉）; happeninghappen; whilewhen; tries-tried; and but; herhis; howwhat; reachedarrived; hospital to hospital; policeman-policemen 九、（浙江省绍
33、兴一中2012届高三上学期期中考试）I was only 12 when we moved to California. I remember that I enjoyed flying non-stopacross a whole country and that I wasnt very happy about leave my friends. But Dad think itd be good for we all to live in a suburb (郊区) instead in the middle of a city. And Uncle Jeff, hisbrother,
34、whod been living in California for about 20 years, were always telling us how wonderfulCalifornia it was. He said it would be easily for Dad to get a job driving a taxi, that had beenDads job in New York. But we all agreed to try it for one year. Now weve been here for four years, and we all love it
35、.athe leave - leaving think - thought weus instead of were- was it 去掉 easilyeasy that - which But- So/And十、（浙江省新昌中学2012届高三上学期期中考试试题）One day Tom and I were walking down the street while we saw an old man fall off his bike. He was badly hurt. Many people crowded around us. Someone suggested carrying t
36、he old man to the roadside, so Tom disagreed. He has learned first aid. He said that they ought to leave him where he was and checked him first. At that time the old man wasnt breathing. Tom asked me to call in the First Aid Center at once and he began to start the old mans breathing, use the mouth-
37、to-mouth way. Within five minutes, the old man began to move little and doctors also arrived. They said that we had done was correct. I have learned from this experience that a knowledge of first aid can make a really difference.改错 whilewhen ushim so-but has-had checked-check call in去掉in use-using little前加a thatwhat really-real