1、【文体指导】1议论文的结构和上下文的连贯性对于议论性的作文,其结构要自然地形成主题、扩展和结尾这样的三段式结构。开头句往往是主题句,主题句要做到内容完整、概括性强、表达清楚、突出主题。一般说来,一篇议论文讨论的是一个主题,其焦点只有一个,要做到主题的统一性。其次上下文的连贯性也很重要,做到段落中的句子之间相互联系、相互依存、上下一体,也就是逻辑关系要一致。另外,适当地利用一些连接词和过渡词会增强段落的连贯性。2议论文段落的基本结构议论文段落的基本结构:主题句(topic sentence)、阐述句(supporting sentence)和结尾句(concluding sentence)。(1
2、)主题句:包括段落的主题和中心思想,一般置于段首,偶尔也置于段中或段末,并不是所有的段落都有主题句,有的段落的主题内容是分散的。(2)阐述句:通过具体而有说服力的事实来展开主题。(3)结尾句:是对段落的概括、总结或是对主题的评论和建议,以增强回味的余地。【常用句式】1We have a discussion about.2We have had a survey on.3Opinions are divided on the question.4Opinions are mainly divided into two groups.5Others have different opinions
3、.6First/Firstly,second/secondly,third/thirdly,finally,then,next,in addition,furthermore,besides,whats more.7Its well known that/everyone knows that/some people think that/It seems obvious that.8In my opinion/view,as far as I know,in conclusion,in short,at last,in other words.【写作任务】人们对于学生网上交友持不同意见。请你
4、用英语写一篇关于学生网上交友的短文,介绍人们的不同观点,并表达自己的看法。赞成的理由反对的理由你的看法1.广交朋友1.浪费时间?2.可自由表达思想2.影响学习3.利于外语学习3.可能上当受骗注意:1.文章必须包括表中的全部内容;2词数100左右。Should students make friends online?_【审题谋篇】第一步明确要求本文是一篇正反观点式的议论文。时态以一般现在时为主;主要人称应为第一人称。第二步确定正文Para 1说明对待网上交友大家有各自不同的观点Para 2说明赞成网上交友的理由Para 3说明反对网上交友的理由Para 4说明自己的看法第三步提炼要点1what
5、s_more 而且2chat_online 网上聊天3express_ones_feelings_and_opinions 表达某人的情感和观点4a_waste_of_time 浪费时间5besides 而且6get cheated 受骗7It is my opinion that.我的观点是8as for 至于/对于第四步扩点成句1通过上网聊天,学生们能够自由自在地抒发自己的情感和发表自己的看法。(一般表达)If they chat online,students can more freely express their feelings and opinions.(句式升级)Chatti
6、ng_online,students can more freely express their feelings and opinions.(现在分词作状语)2网上交友是在浪费时间,这段时间本来可以好好地用在学习上的。(一般表达)Making friends online is a waste of time.That should be spent more meaningfully on study.(句式升级)Making friends online is a waste of time,which_should_be_spent_more_ meaningfully_on_stud
7、y.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)3就我个人的观点来看,学生们应该把学习、健康和安全放在首位。(一般表达)In my opinion,students should place their study,health and safety before other things.(句式升级)It is my opinion that_students_should_place_their_study,health_and_safety_ before_other_things.(that引导的同位语从句)4至于友谊,我们能容易地在我们周围的同学和其他人中找到。(一般表达)We can ea
8、sily find friendship in our classmates and other people around us.(句式升级)As_for_friendship,we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.(介词短语作状语)【范文赏析】Should_students_make_friends_online? Some people say yes.They think the Internet helps them make many friends.Whats more,chatti
9、ng online,students can more freely express their feelings and opinions,and even get help with their foreign language studies.Others,however,think students should not make friends online.They say making friends online is a waste of time,which should be spent more meaningfully on study.Besides,some st
10、udents may get cheated online.It is my opinion that students should place their study,health and safety before other things.As for friendship,we can readily find it in our classmates and other people around us.【亮点点评】本文熟练、恰当地运用了复杂句式,如非限制性定语从句,主语从句,较好地进行了语言表达;同时使用了非谓语动词如、,使得句子简单、条理性强;另外,连接词、插入语的使用如、使文
11、章通顺,增强了逻辑性。.单元语法A)用所给词的正确形式填空1If you had posted the letter,Joan would_have_received(receive) it last Monday.2What would you say or do if someone called(call) you a fool?3If he hadnt_been(not,be) ill,he would have done something to help us.4If you had studied hard,you would_be(be) a college student n
12、ow.5I am not tired.If I were tired,I would_have(have) a rest.6If Mary were(be) a girl of strong character,she would_have_said(say) “No” to her boss.B)用适当的情态动词填空7If you must go,at least wait until the storm is over.8Little Maggie can dress herself now.9He could/was_able_to swim when he was ten years
13、old.10There ought_not_to be much noise in a hospital.11He is so strong that I dare_not fight against him.12Will you read me a story,Mummy?OK.You shall have one if you go to bed as soon as possible.阅读理解Making it to the Scripps National Spelling Bee (a spelling competition) is an amazing achievement f
14、or any kid,but for 11yearold Neil Maes,being born deaf made his journey especially unlikely.After receiving cochlear implants (人工耳蜗) in both ears as a baby,he had to train his brain to understand spoken words.It took countless hours of speech therapy (疗法)“We didnt even know that hed be able to talk,
15、” said his mother,Christy Maes.Now the softspoken kid from Belton,South Carolina is officially one of the nations top young spellers.He earned the right to take the stage in the final rounds of the Scripps National Spelling Bee.Neils parents have always given him a tip,coaching him to always ask the
16、 pronouncer for the meaning of a word,so that he can be sure he heard it correctly.Most contestants do this anyway.“Hes able to spell very difficult words.You tell him,spell this word,and hes able to actually imagine what that sounds like in his head and spell the word.Its actually quite impressive,
17、”said Dr.Michael Hoa,who performed Neils cochlear implantation.“Theres a lot that goes into training your brain to do that.”Neils parents didnt know he was taking part in a spelling bee with his thirdgrade class until he came home and told them he had won.He made it all the way to his regional (地区的)
18、 bee that year,finishing second.Now a naturally shy fifthgrader,Neil is already worn out from the busy beeweek schedule,but he seems happy.“Our main hope out of all of this was to encourage people that are going to be facing what we had to face,” Christy said.But Neil said coming to the bee has moti
19、vated (激发) him to study even harder,so he can return next year.“Its just fun and I want to do it again,” Neil said.【语篇解读】本文是一则新闻报道。文章主要介绍了一名失聪儿童参加拼字比赛的故事。13What makes it difficult for Neil to enter the competition?AHe is naturally shy.BHe is unable to talk.CHe has a hearing disability.DHe is undergo
20、ing medical treatment.答案C解析细节理解题。根据第一段中的for 11yearold Neil Maes,being born deaf made his journey especially unlikely可知,由于Neil天生失聪,因此参加拼字比赛对他来说显得尤其艰难。14What does the underlined word “it” (in Para.5) refer to?AThe tip from Neils parents.BThe coachs pronunciation.CThe meaning.DThe word.答案D解析篇章结构题。根据上文内
21、容可知,Neil是一名有听力障碍的孩子,因此在参加比赛时,父母让他每次都请求考官给出单词的定义,这样便于Neil核实自己是否听准了所要拼写的单词。15What did Michael think of Neil?AHes amazing.BHes very lucky.CHe should study harder.DHe should use his imagination.答案A解析推理判断题。根据Michael医生在第六段中说的hes able to actually imagine what that sounds like in his head and spell the word
22、.Its actually quite impressive和Theres a lot that goes into training your brain to do that可知,他认为Neil非常了不起。16Whats the best title for the text?AHard training will finally pay offBWe can do more for disabled childrenCSpelling bees are becoming more popularDDeaf 11yearold competes in National Spelling B
23、ee答案D解析标题归纳题。文章第一段就点明了文章的主题:11岁失聪儿童参加全国拼字比赛,下文围绕该话题继续展开。由此可知,D项概括了文章主旨,适合做文章标题。.七选五Mike Cohn was a typically active 8yearold running across a park when he suddenly lost his balance and fell flat on his face.Countless doctorsexaminations later,he discovered that he was a victim of a rare neurological
24、 (神经上的) disorder that would quickly damage his eyesight and speech as well as his ability to move.He asked his mother if she could change things to make him like everyone else.“She said no,” he said.“_17_”_18_ Instead of worrying about what he couldnt do,he started focusing on what he could doespeci
25、ally those things that other people thought he shouldnt be able to do.He got a masters degree in education from the University of Minnesota and founded Promote Awareness,an organization that gives special attention to the abilities of people with disabilities.“He overcomes obstacles (障碍) very fast,”
26、 said his sister,Leslie Zent._19_ So he decided to start taking classes at Zenon Dance school.Now he has set up his own dance company,I Can Dance,You Can Dance.He tends to use a wheelchair to help him get around._20_ In one of his dances,he stands while turning his walker into a dancing partner,swin
27、ging it around him as he moves and,at one point,lying on the floor and rolling the walker over his body.“Dance is my therapy (疗法),” said Cohn._21_ “When I first got sick,I felt ugly,” he said.Dance enables him to create beauty.“My body moves like lots of dancers bodies.”AIt is emotional as well as p
28、hysical.BI got lots of support from my mother.CSo he changed his thoughts and attitude.DSometimes he cant move around without a walker.EFour years ago,Cohn began to show an interest in dance.FMy mother made it clear that there would be no pity party.GBut he can move with a walker and “even take a fe
29、w steps without it”【语篇解读】本文是记叙文。文章介绍了跨越身体障碍而热衷舞蹈事业的Mike Cohn。17F患有行动障碍的Mike Cohn问妈妈是否有办法让他像正常人一样,却得到了妈妈的否定回答。由此可知,F项中的no pity party与妈妈的回答no相一致。pity party此处指博得他人同情。18C由下文Cohn克服各种障碍获得教育学硕士学位和创办自己的舞蹈公司可知,得到妈妈否定回答后他改变了以前的想法和态度。C项中的his thoughts指代上文的change things to make him like everyone else。19E由下文的taki
30、ng classes at Zenon Dance School.set up his own dance company可知,Cohn对舞蹈感兴趣。20G由下文的turning his walker into a dancing partner可知,尽管Cohn多半要使用轮椅代步,但他也可以利用助行器站立行动,甚至用它跳舞。G项中的he can move with a walker与此相呼应。21A由上文Cohn说的Dance is my therapy以及下文的Dance enables him to create beauty可知,舞蹈是一种兼顾情绪和身体两方面的疗法,让他从心理和身体都
31、有了积极的改变。.语法填空Keeping a diary in English is one of the effective ways to improve our English writing ability.22.Compared(compare) with other forms of writing,it is shorter and takes 23.less(little) time.It can help us to develop the habit of thinking in English.24.If we persist in this practice,gradu
32、ally well learn how to express ourselves in English.In keeping a diary in English,we certainly run up against many difficulties.In the first place,it often happens 25.that we have trouble finding appropriate words and phrases to give expression to our mind.26.Secondly (second),there are many idiomat
33、ic ways of saying things in Chinese.And it is extremely hard for us to put them into English 27.properly(proper)As far as I am concerned,my 28.suggestion(suggest) is that we should always have a notebook and a ChineseEnglish dictionary within easy reach.Whenever something 29.beats(beat) us,we can fi
34、rst put it down in our notebook and then consult our dictionary.We can also turn to our English teacher for help,if necessary.In short,I believe that it is 30.of great use to keep a diary in English for 31.the development of our writing skills.短文改错The Spring Festival is a most important traditional
35、festival for Chinese people.On January 1st of the lunar calendar,people well dressed and the whole family pays a visit to the oldest generation.Peers send New Year greetings with each other.The elder members gave money in a red envelope to the children as New Year gifts to congratulate on our growth
36、.In the afternoon and the following two days,people will visit their relative and friends,but many people have made use of modern technologies:they send regards to each other through videophones.Nowadays,videophones have entered in peoples lives.When sent greetings to their acquaintances,they talk o
37、n the line as if they are chatting face to face.答案The Spring Festival is most important traditional festival for Chinese people.On January 1st of the lunar calendar,people well dressed and the whole family pays a visit to the generation.Peers send New Year greetings each other.The elder members mone
38、y in a red envelope to the children as New Year gifts to congratulate on growth.In the afternoon and the following two days,people will visit their and friends, many people have made use of modern technologies:they send regards to each other through videophones.Nowadays,videophones have entered in p
39、eoples lives.When greetings to their acquaintances,they talk on the line as if they are chatting face to face.书面表达下列图表反映的是我校2011年与2014年学生健康状况调查的部分数据。请你用英文为某报写一份报告,反映该校三年间学生健康状况的变化情况,分析其原因并提出相应的改进措施(不少于两条)。注意:1.报告必须包括图表中所有内容;2词数100左右;3开头已给出,不计入总词数。A recent survey shows that the health of the students
40、 in our school has been going from bad to worse in the past three years._【参考范文】A_recent_survey_shows_that_the_health_of_the_students_in_our_school_has_been_going_from_bad_to_worse_in_the_past_three_years.The number of nearsighted students has increased from 78.2% in 2011 to 92.5% in 2014,while that
41、of overweight,from 36% to 52.4%.Nearly 10% more students lack sleep because of more homework to do.Besides,over 15% more students become mentally unhealthy.To improve students health,we call for less homework.Only in this way can students get plenty of sleep and meanwhile prevent them from being nearsighted.Proper diets and exercise should also be paid attention to so that they wont easily put on weight.With their heavy burdens removed,students can then keep in normal mental health.