1、Section Integrated skills 写一篇介绍自己最喜欢的食物的文章写作指津本单元写作要求为写一篇介绍自己最喜欢的食物的文章,此类文章属于描述性短文。描述性或介绍性短文是一种常见的写作方式,经常用来介绍某物、某人或某事。在写作时,应该注意把握三点:1正确并清晰地阐述需要描述的事物,如食物、物品或人物等;2以举例说明或结合自己的经历来描写,更容易吸引读者的注意力;3重点描述所要描写物品的主要或关键特征,如外形、气味、方式等。词句助力一、写作常用词汇1festival n节日2favourite n/adj.最喜欢(的)3a variety of各种各样的4filling n.馅5
2、a special moment特殊的时刻6magic n.魔力7delicious adj.美味的8to satisfy ones taste满足某人的口味9happy memories快乐的记忆10be popular with受欢迎11a spoonful of一调羹的12mouthwatering adj.流口水的13ingredient n.成分14smooth adj.平滑的15sweet adj.甜蜜的16adorable adj.讨人喜爱的17take each bite咬一口18mild flavour温润的香味19be made of由组成20consist with与一致
3、21attractive adj.吸引人的22get together聚会二、写作常用句式(注意黑体表达)1Of all the food I have even tried, the mooncake is my favourite.在我吃过的所有食物中,月饼是我最喜欢的。2My favourite food is a popular Italian dessert called tiramisu.我最喜欢的食物是一种很受欢迎的意大利甜点叫提拉米苏。3They have a variety of fillings and among them I love the sweet red bea
4、n filling most.它们有各种各样的馅料,其中我最喜欢甜红豆馅。4The delicious smell soon reaches my nose and my mouth starts to water.香味很快传到我的鼻子里,我的嘴开始流口水。5There are three layers, making the dessert feel soft and smooth.有三层,使甜点感觉又软又滑。6There is also a bitter taste of coffee but this flavour is not very strong.咖啡也有苦味,但味道不是很浓。7
5、She can turn the flour and red beans into wonderful mooncakes like magic.她能把面粉和红豆变成神奇的月饼。8When she places them on the table, they look adorable small, round and shiny goldenbrown.当她把它们放在桌子上时,它们看起来很可爱又小又圆,闪闪发光的金棕色。9When I pick up a mooncake, it feels warm and heavy in my hand.当我拿起一个月饼,它在我的手里感到温暖和沉重。1
6、0As I take each bite, the sweet and mild flavour of the red bean filling slowly fills my mouth.当我每吃一口时,红豆馅的甜味和温和的味道慢慢地充满我的嘴里。11Tiramisu does not look very attractive its brown, because of the coffee and dark chocolate.提拉米苏看起来不是很吸引人因为咖啡和黑巧克力,它是棕色的。典题导学假定你是李华,特别喜欢中华美食粽子。正好你的美国笔友Jerry想要更好地了解粽子的制作过程。请你写
7、一篇文章,简要介绍你的最爱粽子。 注意:1.词数80左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:粽子zongzi五步成文第一步:审题谋篇很关键审题审人称:第一人称审时态:一般现在时为主谋篇Step 1:确定描述的食物,并了解相关特征。Step 2:确定写作要点:如粽子的外形、内馅、寓意等。Step 3:确定常用的表达方式,如定语从句、非谓语动词等。Step 4:确定前后逻辑的衔接。Step 5:注意细节,如拼写、标点符号或句式结构等。语言介绍常见的食物,一般要注意客观和平实,语言风格要得体。 第二步:核心词汇想周全1be called被称作2the Dragon Boat Festiva
8、l端午节3be made of由制成4consist of由组成5maintain the tradition保持这种传统6be popular受欢迎7all the year round一年四季第三步:由词扩句雏形现1我最喜欢的食物是一道很受欢迎的中国食物粽子,也叫Tzung Tzu。 My favourite food is a popular Chinese dish zongzi, which is also called Tzung Tzu.2粽子通常在端午节吃。 Zongzi is usually served during the Dragon Boat Festival3粽子就
9、像一个金字塔形的饺子。 Zongzi is like a pyramidshaped dumpling.4这道美味的食物是用大米做的。This tasty dish is made of rice5它用竹叶或芦苇叶包着,使它有一种特殊的风味。 It is wrapped in bamboo or reed leaves and it gives out a special flavour.6它由肉、花生、蛋黄或其他馅料组成。 It consists of meat, peanut, egg yolk or other fillings.7我还记得我和家人一起做粽子的那一刻。I still re
10、member the moment and at that time I made zongzi with my family members.8那是一个值得珍惜的时刻。 It is a cherished moment9大多数人仍然保持端午节吃粽子的传统。 Most people still maintain the tradition of eating zongzi on the day of the Dragon Boat Festival.10这种特殊的美味已经非常流行了。 The special delicacy has become popular11现在一年四季你都可以买到粽子
11、。You can now buy zongzi all the year round第四步:句式升级造亮点1用过去分词作定语改写句1My favourite food is a popular Chinese dishzongzi, also called Tzung Tzu.2用并列连词连接句4、5This tasty dish is made of rice and wrapped in bamboo or reed leaves to give it a special flavour.3用定语从句升级句7、8I still remember the moment when I made
12、 zongzi with my family members, which was a cherished one.4用状语从句合并句10、11But the special delicacy has become so popular that you can now buy it all the year round.第五步:过渡衔接连成篇My favourite foodzongziMy favourite food is a popular Chinese dish zongzi, also called Tzung Tzu, which is usually served durin
13、g the Dragon Boat Festival.Zongzi is like a pyramidshaped dumpling.This tasty dish is made of rice and wrapped in bamboo or reed leaves to give it a special flavour.It consists of meat, peanut, egg yolk or other fillings.I still remember the moment when I made zongzi with my family members, which wa
14、s a cherished one.Most people still maintain the tradition of eating zongzi on the day of the Dragon Boat Festival.However, the special delicacy has become so popular that you can now buy it all the year round.即时演练在英语课堂上,英语老师介绍了一些美食,并要求用英语以“我最喜欢的一种食物”为题写一篇文章。注意:1.词数80左右;2可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考范文:Chinese
15、 dumpling My favourite foodChinese dumpling (Jiaozi) is a traditional Chinese food,which is essential during holidays in northern China.Since the shape of Chinese dumpling is similar to ancient Chinese gold symbolizing the wealth.Chinese dumpling is delicious.You can make a variety of Chinese dumpli
16、ngs, using different fillings based on your taste and how various ingredients mixed together by you.When I was young, we often got together to make dumplings during the New Years Eve.We always hid a coin in one of the dumplings to let the family members to find.If someone found the coin, he or she would be likely to have a good fortune in the following New Year.I love Chinese dumpling.