1、写作专练(五)写作(共两节,满分35分)第一节短文改错(共10小题;每小题1分,满分10分)(南昌市NCS20170607项目第三次模拟)Mike,a famous writer,lives just next door to me.He is always ready give a helping hand to others,but he enjoys great popularity in the neighborhood.He often teaches us how to write stories and encourages me about his own experience
2、.He told to me he was born in a poor family.As a little boy,he has a dream to become a famous writer.He worked hardly and overcame thousands of difficulty.Finally,he entered a university in that he wrote many story books.Up till now,aging only forty,he has been very famous around the country.【答案】Mik
3、e,a famous writer,lives just next door to me.He is always ready give a helping hand to others, he enjoys great popularity in the neighborhood.He often teaches how to write stories and encourages me his own experience.He told me he was born in a poor family.As a little boy,he a dream to become a famo
4、us writer.He worked and overcame thousands of .Finally,he entered a university in he wrote many story books.Up till now, only forty,he has been very famous around the country.第一处:ready后加to。考查动词不定式。be ready to do sth.为固定用法,意为“准备好做某事;乐于做某事”。第二处:but改为and/so。考查连词。Mike乐于助人,因此他在社区很受欢迎。根据语境可知,此处用and/so连接两个
5、并列分句。第三处:us改为me。考查代词。第二段谈及的都是Mike与作者本人之间的事,所以us改为me。第四处:about改为with。考查介词。Mike用他自己的经历鼓励作者。with在此意为“以,使用”。第五处:删除to。考查介词。tell sb.sth.为固定用法,意为“告诉某人某事”。第六处:has改为had。考查时态。根据句中的As a little boy可知,此处叙述的是过去的事,故用一般过去时。第七处:hardly改为hard。考查副词。Mike学习努力,克服了很多困难。hard“努力地”,符合语境。hardly意为“几乎不”。第八处:difficulty改为difficult
6、ies。考查名词的数。根据句中的thousands of可知,此处用名词的复数形式。第九处:that改为which。考查定语从句。定语从句的先行词为university,关系词作介词in的宾语,所以用“in which”引导定语从句。第十处:aging改为aged。考查形容词。aged为形容词,意为“岁”,符合语境。第二节书面表达(满分25分)(2018南宁市高三毕业班模底联考)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Peter想提高中文水平,进一步了解中国文化。请给他写一封信,推荐学习资源(resource)。内容包括:1学习资源:报纸、杂志及其他途径;2推荐理由;3表达祝愿。注意:1.词数100左右;2
7、可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Peter,_Yours,Li Hua【范文赏读】Dear_Peter,I am glad to hear that you are eager to improve your Chinese and know more about Chinese culture.Its my pleasure to recommend some resources to you.Reading some popular newspapers and magazines,such as Southern Weekly,is the f
8、irst choice,from which you can get lots of information about Chinese customs.Besides,there are other ways to experience the Chinese language and culture on the Internet,on TV or with some apps.The interesting news and stories in these resources are so amazing that you will never feel bored.I am sure
9、 you can benefit a lot from them. I sincerely hope that you can make great progress in learning Chinese and have a better understanding of Chinese culture.Yours,Li_Hua 【一句多译】Generally speaking,I think you ought to read as many newspapers and magazines like Southern Weekly as possible because you can acquire a better knowledge of Chinese customs from them. How I wish you could live your life to the fullest with the help of Chinese culture.