1、Section Writing about a sporting moment学范文背佳句它山之石，可以攻玉范文诠释教材原文名师论道Last Saturday, I went to the school playground to watch the final of the 4100metre relay at our annual sports tournament. It was an extraordinary experience and something I will never forget. Before the race, everyone was quiet and st
2、ill. I had never imagined that the atmosphere at a sports event could be so intense. When the runners set off, everyone went wild! We all stood up and started cheering and shouting. It was like being hit by a huge wave of excitement. I could see the runners straining to run as fast as they could, wh
3、ile trying not to drop their batons at the change. The race was all over in just one minute. It was Li Chong, the fastest student in our school, who first crossed the finish line. Everyone was on their feet, cheering. I was also caught up in the excitement and cheered so hard that I thought my lungs
4、 would burst! It was so wonderful to be part of this sporting moment and enjoy its speed and passion.学语言叙述过去发生的事情使用一般过去时。使用形容词extraordinary描述了这次经历难忘的原因。使用形容词quiet和still形象地描写出了比赛前的紧张气氛。使用went wild，cheering，shouting等词语生动形象地描写出了比赛开始后的场面。强调句的使用非常恰当地突出了最后的获胜者是谁。使用cheering，excitement以及so .that句型描写出了比赛后的情景
5、。最后一句用形容词wonderful和动词enjoy描写出了作者的感受。学结构General introductionWhat I saw and heard before the eventWhat I saw and heard during the eventWhat I saw and heard after the eventHow I felt佳句背诵1.During the summer holidays, I usually go swimming in the sea with my family and we always have a wonderful time.在暑假
6、期间，我通常和我的家人去海里游泳，我们总是玩得很开心。2.During the basketball game yesterday afternoon, Su Hua and Li Jiang bumped into each other, trying to catch the ball.在昨天下午的篮球比赛中，苏华和李江试图接住球，撞在了一起。3.In the morning, there are a lot of old men doing exercise in the park .清晨，许多老人在公园里锻炼身体。4.No matter how cold it is, we must
7、all stick to our exercise routine.不管天气多么寒冷，我们都要坚持锻炼。5.The sportsmen are exercising to improve the strength of the muscles on their legs.运动员们正在锻炼，以便加强腿部肌肉的力量。6.Regular physical exercises can strengthen ones resistance against illness.经常锻炼身体能够提高人体的抵抗力。7.This may be the most unforgettable experience in
8、 my life.这可能是我一生中最难忘的经历。8.People who enjoy playing sports are usually healthy.喜欢体育运动的人通常是健康的。9.For one thing, it not only helps us build up our physical health, but also helps us learn more efficiently in turn.一方面，这不仅有助于我们强身健体，而且反过来有助于我们更高效地学习。10.So I suggest you should keep the balance between your
9、 study and entertainment, such as sports, listening to music and so on.因此，我建议你应该保持学习和娱乐之间的平衡，像运动、听音乐等。仿佳作找差距巧借外力，事半功倍题目要求假如你曾代表你班参加春季运动会4100米接力比赛，请你用英语写一篇短文，详细描述一下当时参加比赛的情形与赛后的感受。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 仿写步骤Step 1一仿结构布局合理 第一段：对经历的这次比赛作简单介绍第二段：详细描述一下赛前、赛中和赛后你所听到和看到的 第三段：描写一下你的感受 Step 2二仿语言规范美观
10、1我曾经在我们的春季运动会上跑过4100米接力赛的第一棒。(first leg, relay) I once ran the first leg of 4100metre relay at our spring sports meeting. 2这是令人兴奋和难忘的。(unforgettable)It was exciting and unforgettable. 3我站在起跑线上，等待着鸣枪，我几乎能听到自己的心跳。(现在分词短语作状语)Standing on the starting line and waiting for the starting gun, I could almost
11、 hear my own heart beating. 4枪响了，我几乎把其他的一切都抛在脑后。(过去完成时，block out) The gun sounded, and I almost had blocked out everything else. 5直到今天，我都不记得我是怎么跑完这一段的。(宾语从句) To this day, I dont remember how I finished my leg of the race.6我把接力棒传给了第二名。(baton) I passed the baton to the second runner. 7我听到了疯狂的欢呼和叫喊。(wi
12、ld)I heard the wild cheering and shouting. 8整个比赛一下子就结束了。(in just an instant)The whole race was over in just an instant. 9人群都站了起来，欢呼声更响了。(rise to ones feet，并列句) The crowd rose to their feet and their cheering became even louder. 10我们队赢得了比赛，我们四个紧紧地拥抱了好一会儿。(并列句) Our team won the race, and the four of u
13、s hugged each other tight for quite a while. 11我感到很高兴。(feel) I felt really happy. Step 3三仿句间过渡自然 1把句3和句4用适当的连词进行合理地过渡 Standing on the starting line and waiting for the starting gun, I could almost hear my own heart beating. Then the gun sounded, and I almost had blocked out everything else. 2把句6和句7用
14、“only状语”置于句首进行合并Only when I passed the baton to the second runner did I hear the wild cheering and shouting. Step 4誊写 I once ran the first leg of 4100metre relay at our spring sports meeting. It was exciting and unforgettable. Standing on the starting line and waiting for the starting gun, I could a
15、lmost hear my own heart beating. Then the gun sounded, and I almost had blocked out everything else. To this day, I dont remember how I finished my leg of the race. Only when I passed the baton to the second runner did I hear the wild cheering and shouting. The whole race was over in just an instant. The crowd rose to their feet and their cheering became even louder. Our team won the race, and the four of us hugged each other tight for quite a while. I felt really happy.