1、类型5| 求助信1求助信要简明扼要，语气委婉、真诚，不强人所难，并尽量提供足够的信息，能使收信人愿意帮助你。2写作指导(1)清晰陈述请求的内容或所要获取的信息；(2)提出的问题数量不宜过多，要便于回答；(3)解释收信人回信的理由并表示感谢。假如你是某中学的高一学生李明，最近与母亲关系紧张，难以相处。请根据下表内容用英语给某英文杂志Helper栏目的编辑Mr.Smith写一封80词左右的求助信，请他帮你解决问题。你的情况你母亲的情况你的问题1.学习成绩好；2.爱母亲；3.有点害怕母亲。1.大学教授，工作勤奋，很少有时间和你说话；2.对你严格要求，易发脾气。1.与母亲很少交流；2.不知如何沟通。习
2、作评阅自我修改三档作文Dear Mr.Smith，I am writing to tell you my problem troubled me for a long time.It is relationship between my mother and me.My mother is a university professor she works very hard.She is strict in me but she is so busy with her work that she finds little time to talk to me.I love her and I
3、do well in my studies，but I still feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper easy.I dont know how to communicate with her.Maybe its because we have seldom sat down and exchange our feelings and thoughts. (如果您能帮助我，我将不胜感激。)Best wishes.Yours sincerely，Li Ming1.避免词汇搭配错误处in改为with2.杜绝语法错误处tr
4、oubled应改成troubling处应添加冠词the处应添加连词and处easy改为easily处exchange改为exchanged3.要点一定不要遗漏补上处要点：Id appreciateit if you give me a way out.自我提升向极优作文迈进Dear Mr.Smith，I am writing to tell you my problem troubling me for a long time.It is the relationship between my mother and me.My mother is a university professor，
5、and she works very hard.She is strict with me but she is so busy with her work that she finds little time to talk to me.I love her and I do well in my studies，but I still feel a little afraid of her because she loses her temper easily.I dont know how to communicate with her.Maybe its because we have
6、 seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts.Id appreciate it if you give me a way out.Best wishes.Yours sincerely，Li Ming高级句型处改为定语从句：which/that has troubled me for a long time处改为现在分词短语：working very hard处改为倒装句：so busy is she with her work that she finds little time to talk to me用the reason why.is that.连接、句：The reason why I dont know how to communicate with her is that we have seldom sat down and exchanged our feelings and thoughts.
