1、基础写作1-2题型探究 探究点一难句的表达下面我们来谈论一下基础写作的解题方法。基础写作的难点是难句的表达。每一道题目的中文内容都有一些与英文表达稍有差异甚至大相径庭的表达形式。【举例说明】假设你是李华， 请根据你校美化校园的规划， 用英语给你在美国的笔友Peter写一封信， 介绍该规划。信的主要内容如下：【写作要求】1应包含所给出的全部信息， 开头和结尾已经给出，但不计入总句数；2必须使用5个句子组成连贯的短文。Dear Peter，I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program. .Welcome
2、to our school if you have any chance.Yours，Li Hua【学生样本】Dear Peter，I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.In order to make our school beautiful and clean the air, we plan to have more trees in our school now.In order to get good places to study and live, we have many pl
3、ans.First, we plan to build a botanical garden and let students visit and use.Second, we plan to build up a small garden for people to rest and study.At last, we plan to build some statues of famous people to effect students and teachers.Welcome to our school if you have any chance.Yours，Li Hua【评论点拨
4、】 我们来看看学生的样本有什么地方可以改进：第句：“In order to make our school beautiful and clean the air ”比较生硬， to make our school beautiful应该改为to make our school more beautiful；“we plan to have more trees in our school now”中的have改为plant会好些。第句：没有涉及表格内的内容， 是个废句， 而且还霸占了后面的信息的位置。第句：“First, we plan to build a botanical garden
5、 and let students visit and use.”中的画线部分没有表达出“供同学们参观、实践”的意思。第句：“Second, we plan to build up a small garden for people to rest and study.”中应删掉up, study后应该加上in。不过改为“Second, we plan to build a small garden in which we can take a rest and do some reading.”会好些。第句：“At last, we plan to build some statues of
6、 famous people to effect students and teachers.”中的effect应该改为encourage。另外，这篇文章的主语全部都是we, 虽然可以最大限度地减少英语表达方面的错误， 但是比较单调， 可能影响高分。不过， 我们只要变换句式， 例如改为被动语态等， 就可以达到很好的效果。【参考范文】Dear Peter，I would like to tell you that our school has worked out a new program.The purposes of the program are to make our school m
7、ore beautiful, to make the air cleaner and fresher, and to turn our school into a better place for us to study and live in. According to the program, we will plant different kinds of trees, flowers and grass in and around our school.A botanical garden will be built for us to visit and practice in. B
8、esides, we are to build a small garden in which we can do some reading and take a rest. Whats more, some statues of famous people will be set up to encourage us to work harder. Welcome to our school if you have any chance.Yours，Li Hua【注】 由于主语灵活变动， 使文章读起来摆脱了呆板， 行文有了生气。 探究点二句子的质量我们经常说某个句子地道， 就是因为这个句子体
9、现了英语民族的思维方式。在基础写作中，要经常使用这种地道的句子。【举例说明】比较以下句子：1Clinton had wanted to collect a heavy tax on the middle class.修改后：A heavy tax on the middle class was Clintons idea. 2The people who listen to the radio have a habit of getting up early, but those who watch TV usually go to bed late.修改后：Radio listeners a
10、re early birds, but TV viewers are usually night owls.3After the American farmers used the industrial methods into agriculture, they made great progress in agriculture.修改后： The use of industrial methods was the reason for Americas great progress in agriculture. 【评论点拨】第1句首先呈现信息的焦点“向中产阶级征收重税”， 然后才说“这是
11、克林顿想干的事情”。句子的was就是“曾经”的意思。第2句运用构词法与修辞手法。the people who listen to the radio被复合词radio listeners所代替， those who watch TV被复合词TV viewers所代替， 干脆利落。have a habit of getting up early读起来有点呆板， 使用修辞手法把早起的人比喻为early birds, 又把晚睡的人比喻为night owls, 这样读起来就会饶有趣味。 第3句运用名词化的技术。所谓名词化， 就是把英文的动词改为名词， 通过其他词来指示名词之间的关系。the Ameri
12、can farmers used the industrial methods into agriculture.是一个句子， 修改后变为名词短语 the use of industrial methods。句子they made great progress in agriculture变为名词短语Americas great progress in agriculture。前一个名词短语是原因， 后一个名词短语是结果， 中间用名词reason就说明了两个名词短语之间的关系。 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C和D）中，选出最佳选项。A cancer-stricken Briti
13、sh teenage girl said Thursday she had been moved by messages of support from around the world after writing an online “Bucket List” of things she wanted to do before dyingAlice Pyne，l5，created an Internet blog in which she described her fight against a cancer of the white blood cells“Ive been fighti
14、ng cancer for almost four years and now I know that the cancer is gaining on me and it doesnt look like Im going to win this one，” she wrote For her list，the teenager took inspiration from the 2007 film “The Bucket List” in which two men who were badly ill，draw up a list of things they wish to do be
15、fore they dieOn her list，at the site wwwalicepyneblogspotcom，she has included making everyone sign up to be a bone marrow donor（骨髓捐赠者），swimming with sharks ，meeting boy band Take That and getting a purple iPad computerMessages of support and offers of help quickly flooded her webpage and it became o
16、ne of the most talked about subjects on Twitter “Oh, dear and I thought that I was just doing a little blog for a few friends!” she wrote after her site attracted huge attention“Thank you so much for all your lovely messages to me”Pyne，who lives with her family in the northwest English town of Ulver
17、ston，revealed（透露）the management of Take That had arranged for her to see the band after reading her blogA group of local lawmakers have also joined forces with the Anthony blood cancer charity to encourage people to join its stem cell register1What happened after Alice Pyne wrote her “Bucket List”?A
18、People around the world sent messages to support herBPeople sent gifts to her from all over the worldCA lot of people offered to donate bone marrow to herDThe media called on people to help her27Alice Pyne wrote her “Bucket List” to Acatch peoples attention Bsay goodbye to a few friendsCgive comfort
19、 to two terminally ill men Dexpress her last few wishes3It can be inferred from the second paragraph that Alice Pyne Ais unaware of her own conditionsBis very sad to know that she will die Cis calm to know that death is approachingDis still quite confident in fighting against cancer 4Which of the fo
20、llowing is NOT on Alice Pynes “Bucket List”? ATo ask people to donate bone marrowBTo get a cool computerCTo swim with sharkDTo meet a boy 5Take That will arrange to Ameet Pyne in person Bhelp Pyne in any possible wayCdonate money to Pyne Dinvite Pyne to join the band【参考答案】1-5、ADCDA阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（
21、A、B、C、D）中，选出最佳选项。A round of applause, please, for the Indian man who recently sang for 80 hours straight, setting a new Guinness world record. Its an impressive feat, to be sure, but lets just hope he still has a voiceAccording to Indian newspapers, Rajesh Burbure has been told to keep silent for se
22、veral days so his vocal cords can heal. It was reported that Burbure and his family are in a celebratory mood. “Its a proud moment for all of us,” his wife told DNAI. I, on the other hand, am unable to share their enthusiasm. Dont get me wrong: I hope the 35-year-old Burbure lives forever, sells a m
23、illion records and becomes an international celebrity. But his recordsinging for 80 hours straightis about as meaningful as most of the other curious but crazy feats listed in the Guinness Book of World Records. Granted, Im not qualified to speak on the subject. Ive got no world records to my name,
24、and I never expect to have any. Then again, maybe I am qualified to speak for those of us who have better things to do than train for years to sing an 80-hour medley of pop songs. But lets not just blame poor Burbure. Hes not the only person chasing meaningless reputationThe Guinness Book of World R
25、ecords is full of the names of people who at one time grew the longest hair, or built the biggest bicycle, or baked the largest cheesecake. To all of these enterprising souls I ask, simply, “What was it all for?”Congratulations! For all of your painstaking effort, you became a footnote in a thick bo
26、ok that no one reads, except for you and the person who will eventually surpass you, with one more hour of singing, a few more centimeters of steel or a few more pounds of cheese. After all, records are made to be broken.60. From the text, we can conclude that the author _.A. thinks singing for 80 h
27、ours straight is completely meaningless B. feels it a pity he was not invited to share the happiness with the Burbures C. is quite worried about Burbures vocal cords D. has no Guinness records, so he admires Burbures feat 61. The authors attitude to some Guinness world records is _.A. positive B. im
28、pressed C. negative D. touched62. We can infer from the article that _.A. after the 80 hours of singing, Burbure could no longer speakB. Burbures wife didnt support his attempt to make a Guinness recordC. many have criticized Burbure for his stupid behaviorD. challenging a Guinness record may be har
29、mful to the health63. What can possibly be the best title for the passage?A. What Was the PointB. The Boring Guinness BookC. A New Guinness RecordD. Records Are Made to be Broken【参考答案】60A 6163CDA 阅读下列短文，从每题所给的四个选项（A、B、C、D）中，选出最佳选项。Taylors English Language Preparation 2011www.taylorscollege.edu.au/te
30、lp If you need additional help to gain the high level of English language necessary for academic study, Taylors English Language Preparation (TELP) is the perfect solution. Throughout your TELP studies you will be an active language learner. You will be surrounded by opportunities to communicate in
31、English, with friends, teachers, families and local people. You will gain English language skills which you will keep for life.l English: the language of Taylors CollegeStrong English language skills are necessary for success in your chosen Taylors program. The TELP program, delivered in 12 week ter
32、ms, is specifically designed to provide language training for academic study. Our teachers are fully trained English Language Teaching professionals, who will assist you in a caring and supportive classroom atmosphere.TELP focuses on:Language studiesFormal writing styles Note takingAssignment writin
33、g Intensive listeningReadingl Progressing to our High School or Foundation ProgramsUpon completion of TELP, you do not take an IELTS test before you begin our High School or Foundation programs.l NEAS AccreditationTaylors College has been assessed as operating at a high standard, in keeping with NEA
34、S standards for English Language Intensive Course for Overseas Students (ELICOS). A recent report commented favourably on the quality and commitment of staff and the impressive student management systems and procedures in place.l TELP term datesStudents are encouraged to enroll（注册）at the start of a
35、term; however, TELP courses allow for entry every four weeks.2011 dates 17 January 8 April 11 April 1 July 4 July 23 September 26 September 16 Decemberl 2011 Summer School 19 December 13 January 201264. The TELP program .A. is popular and thought highly of by studentsB. is aimed at those who have pa
36、ssed an IELTS testC. makes sure students have a communicative atmosphereD. makes sure students learn the English language for four months65. The underlined word “accreditation” in the fourth paragraph refers to official .A. approvalB. assistanceC. admissionD. application 66. It can be inferred from
37、the text that .A.TELP courses permits students to have lessons at any timeB. start date of the first term in 2012 is probably January 16thC. students who study from 20th December to 14th January have cold weatherD. High School and Foundation programs at Taylors college have no entry requirements67. What information will probably be provided following TELP term dates?A.TELP feesB.TELP description C. TELP coursesD.TELP term dates in 2012【参考答案】64CA 6667、 BA
