1、Section 写作指导写作方法指导 写一篇关于上网安全的博客写作储备阅读教材P32博客,总结博客的写作特点:.博客的格式TitleBodyEnding.博客的架构标题介绍正文结论评论.博客的语言特点语言简明准确,通俗易懂,清楚明白,条理分明。.关于网络安全博客的常用词汇1在网上与某人聊天chat with sb. online2在网上购物go shopping online3保护个人隐私protect ones own privacy4使上网安全keep surfing online safe5设置一个强密码set a strong password6泄露太多个人信息give out too
2、 much personal information7身份证号码the number of the identity card8私人地址及其他私人信息personal address and other personal information.关于网络安全博客的常用句型1You shouldnt give out too much personal information while chatting online.在网上聊天时,你不应该透露太多个人信息。2You should use a website that you are familiar with while shopping o
3、nline.当你在网上购物时,你应该使用一个你熟悉的网站。3Youd better set a strong password to keep your privacy safe.你最好设置一个强密码来保护你的隐私。4You had better never/mustnt use a public computer while shopping online.当你在网上购物时,最好不要/一定不要使用公共计算机。5It is important to keep yourself safe by using a strong password.使用强密码来保护你自己是很重要的。典例剖析根据下列提示
4、写一篇关于网上购物安全的博客。1使用一个你熟悉的网站;2使用一个强密码;3不要使用公共电脑。注意:词数80左右。审题谋篇.定框架好的开始,成功的一半体裁说明文人称第一人称时态一般现在时框架A titleIntroductionTo introduce the topic of the passageBodyThe advice about keeping safe while shopping onlineEndingMaking a request for comments.定要点、关键词及动词时态打造一篇要点全面、用词准确得体、时态多样的极优作文要点一:我们不出家门就可以购物。We_can
5、_do_shopping_without_going_out_of_home.要点二:我们应该使用一个我们熟悉的网站。We_should_use_a_website_that_we_are_familiar_with.要点三:我们不应该使用公共电脑。We_shouldnt_use_a_public_computer.要点四:我们应该保护好我们的隐私。We_should_protect_our_privacy_well.要点五:我们应该使用强密码来保护我们的财产和人身安全。We should use a strong password to_keep_our_treasure_and_ourse
6、lves_safe.词汇、句式升级创造极优作文的倩词靓句升级句式一:用形容词短语“familiar to”及“be our first choice”来改写要点二A_website_familiar_to_us_is_our_first_choice.升级句式二:用had better“while”引导的时间状语从句的省略句改写并扩写要点三We_had_better_never_use_a_public_computer_while_shopping_online.升级句式三:用“use.to do.”结构来改写要点四We_should_use_a_strong_password_to_pro
7、tect_our_privacy_well.升级句式四:用“it is important to do sth.”及“bydoing”来改写要点五It is important_to_keep_our_treasure_and ourselves_safe_by_using a strong password.组建极优作文水到渠成的成就感:动力的源泉_参考范文:Keep safe while shopping onlineAs far as we know, the Internet is playing a more and more important role in our daily
8、life. We can do shopping without going out of home. But how can we keep safe while shopping online?First,a website familiar to us is our first choice. Second, wed better never use a public computer while shopping online. Last, we should use a strong password to protect our privacy well. Some persons
9、 may steal our accounts or numbers of our identity cards to steal our money or do something bad. So it is important to keep our treasure and ourselves safe online by using a strong password.Do you have any good experiences about surfing online? Or do you have any good advice for staying safe online?
10、 Post your comments below, please.即学即练根据下列提示写一篇关于网上聊天安全的博客。1不要泄露太多个人信息;2不要独自见网友。注意:1.可根据提示适当发挥;2词数80左右。_参考范文:Keep safe while chatting onlineWith the Internet becoming popular with us everyone, we all like to chat with each other online instead of chatting face to face. But, how can we keep ourselves
11、 safe while chatting online? In my opinion, we should follow the following rules to keep safe while chatting online.First, however friendly people online seem to be, you should never give out too much personal information to them. Second,always be polite while chatting online to avoid being attacked
12、 by some ill persons. Third, you mustnt meet anyone that you meet online alone. Many people were hurt by those who were met online. Anyway, people met online is not really familiar to us because their information given to us may be false. So the more careful we are, the safer we will become online.Do you have any good experiences about chatting online? Or do you have any good advice for staying safe while chatting online? Post your comments below, please.