1、高考资源网（） 您身边的高考专家写作组合练训练3.应用文写作假定你是李华，正在新西兰学习，你计划寒假期间在当地旅行，请写一封email向旅行社询问相关的旅行信息。内容应包括：1旅行信息(如景点等)；2当地特色(如食品等)；3注意事项。注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3开头语和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。Dear Sir or Madam， Sincerely yours，Li Hua【写作指导】本篇应用文写作要求学生给新西兰的旅行社写一封email，咨询旅行信息和当地特色。本文属于书信类应用文中的咨询信。人称用第一人称，时态用一般现在时。本文可分三段写作。首段作自我
2、介绍，表明写信的目的；第二段为主体段，写清想要咨询的问题，如当地有什么景点，有什么特色食品以及有哪些注意事项；第三段表达希望能尽快收到对方回应的愿望。在遣词造句上，学生可以使用咨询信常见的套句，如“Im writing to ask for information about.”，“I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.”等；此外，应尽量使用高级词汇和较复杂句型，如定语从句、同位语从句、倒装句等；还应注意合理使用连接成分，以增强文章的逻辑性和层次感。【参考范文】Dear Sir or Madam，
3、Im Li Hua，a Chinese student studying in New Zealand.Im writing to ask for information about your agencys New Zealands travel for the winter vacation.Could you tell me the departure time and traveling routes? As we know，New Zealand is famous for its beautiful scenery and places of interest and I want
4、 to know more details about these.Besides, Im also interested in the local food.How much do I have to pay for the travel? At length，are there other things I should be aware of?Id be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.Sincerely yours，Li Hua【导学号：85602038】.读后续写阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之
5、构成一个完整的故事。A 56yearold Montreal man looking to shake off a midlife depression walked around the world in 11 years，returning this week to Canada，looking very happy after realizing a dream.A bit thinner and with a few more gray hairs，Jean Beliveau was pushing a threewheel stroller that carried his slee
6、ping bag，clothes and a first aid box.Walking at a light cheerful pace，he expects to come full circle，arriving in Montreal on October 16 after passing through the capital，Ottawa.He stopped only briefly to eat some food and described some of his adventures on this trip to curious strangers，passing on
7、a joy and peacefulness he gained from total freedom.He did not know where he would sleep that night，depending on noone and with little money in his pocket.But he was not worried in the leastit has been this way for the past 11 years and he is fine with it.In Montreal，he will reunite with his longtim
8、e girlfriend Luce Archambault，who has supported him throughout his extraordinary adventure and even created a website detailing his travels：www.walk.org.Beliveau left Montreal on the day of his 45th birthday，August 18，2000，after his small sign business closed down.He decided to run around the world
9、to try to escape that pain in his life.Archambault and his two children from a previous marriage did not try to hold him back.“It was cool，” said his son Thomas Eric，who was 20yearold at the time.Over 11 years，he traveled across deserts and mountains.He fell in love for nine days in Mexico，wore a lo
10、ng beard in Sudan，and ate insects in Africa，dog in South Korea and snake in China.Beliveau only fell seriously ill once in Algeria，was robbed only once by two young drunks in South Africa，and was put into prison only once in Ethiopia for no apparent reason.It was also in Ethiopia that he was once in
11、 despair，which nearly caused him to quit and go home.He said he felt very lonely.Archambault back in Montreal convinced him to go on.注意：1所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1：Certainly，Beliveau slept under a few bridges and in shelters for th
12、e homeless. Paragraph 2：Today，he is penniless，but insists he is richer for his experiences. 【写作指导】本文是一篇记叙文。讲述了Beliveau生意失败后陷入了痛苦绝望之中，为了从痛苦中解脱出来，他开始周游世界11年，这期间遭遇了种种困境。续写部分第一段要沿着作者的思路继续讲述这11年周游世界的遭遇和不容易；续写部分的第二段要描写Beliveau这11年的收获，以及返回加拿大后他未来的打算要以这11年的经历为原型做演讲。续写文章一定要与文章脉络吻合，沿着作者的思路进行续写。同时，可使用过渡连词或副词，以
13、使文章衔接更加顺畅。续写文章要采用一般过去时，以第三人称进行书写。【参考范文】Certainly，Beliveau slept under a few bridges and in shelters for the homeless.And he even saw the inside of a rough prison，but much more often he was invited to eat with people interested in his adventure and to sleep in their homes.He left Montreal with CAN $4
14、，000 in his pocket and ended up spending that amount each year provided to him by Archambault，with whom he kept in constant contact through online telephone service，and also relied on the kindness of strangers to get by.Today，he is penniless，but insists he is richer for his experiences.“I left with
15、nothing, but I return now with a wealth of knowledge and understanding，” he said.Jean Beliveau said he aims to write a book and give lectures on his experiences，and praise “harmony between people，listening to one another and accepting others differences”On a personal level，his book is a love story t
16、hat ends well.概要写作(2016绍兴市鲁迅中学质检)阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。To travel abroad，we often meet the problem of what to take and how to take it.Take as little as possible.Choose clothes for your use in different kinds of situations and when you have made your final selection，take half of it! It is always a
17、 big problem to take too many things，and anyway if necessary，you can buy what you need in America.Things like jeans，Tshirts and other clothes are good buys in the US.If you hunt around you can usually find something on sale.Whatever baggage you take，make sure it is easy to take.Getting on and off bu
18、ses and trains，even just changing planes，can be a test if your bags are too heavy or too many.The best way is to take one suitcase，and then a smaller bag.Even when you have to check in your suitcase at the airport or bus station，you can keep all your money and documents by your side.It is also a goo
19、d idea to keep a change of clothing in your shoulder bag in case your suitcase gets lost by an airline or bus company.The means you choose to travel around USA will depend on your money，your time and something else.Since there are certain discounts available to travelers who buy their tickets outsid
20、e USA，it is a good idea to make travel plans before you go.Also，when you buy your tickets outside the US，you save the eight percent sales tax.Travel is like everything else in Americayou have to shop around for the best buys.Never be afraid to ask for the cheapest fare.The clerk seldom offers you th
21、e cheapest one. 【写作指导】本文是一篇说明文的概要写作。说明文通常有中心句，写概要时注意找出中心句，抓住关键词，然后用自己的语言重组信息。通读文章内容可知，这篇文章的中心句是第一段第一句，主要帮助人们解决去国外旅行时要带什么以及怎样带的问题。因此在概括时要把文章主题句中的中心词(To travel abroad，meet the problem，what to take，how to take)用自己的话概括出来。尤其注意要点要全面，本篇文章内容应概括成三个要点，即旅游时该带什么、怎样带以及这样做的原因，每个要点用一个复合句表达，注意总词数为60词左右。为了避免抄袭嫌疑，要注意
22、词性和句式的转换。最后，学生要注意书写规范、美观，保持卷面整洁。【参考范文】The passage is mainly about how to solve the problem of what to take and how to take it when traveling abroad.First，take as little as possible.This is because you can buy what you need in America if necessary.Second，make sure that your baggage is easy to take.Youd better take one suitcase and a smaller bag for important things.Finally，make travel plans ahead of time，which will save your time and money.【导学号：85602039】高考资源网版权所有，侵权必究！
