1、写作进行时(一)记叙文技巧点拨.写作要点记叙文是以叙述为基本方法来记人、叙事,构思记叙文时,应该考虑到以下几个方面:(1)场景记叙文往往一开始就提供事情发生的背景,交代时间、地点和人物。(2)结构记叙文的叙述方式有顺叙、倒叙和插叙。(3)人称记叙文可用第一人称叙述,也可用第三人称叙述。(4)时态记叙文通常是记叙过去发生的事情,故常用过去时态。.常用模板/句式A结构模板_时间_is memorable because_人物_had a meaningful experience on that day. In the morning, we_活动一_. Upon arrival, we bega
2、n to_活动二_. Some were_活动三_. Others were_活动四_. After getting the work done, we_活动五_. Seeing_活动六_, we_感受_. We feel its our duty to_动作_B常用句式1. I was about to do.when.2. Tired as we were, we still felt quite happy.3. It was snowing/raining heavily on Monday morning.4. Last night I was busy preparing for
3、my test when I heard a loud noise.5. Its reported that Sanlu milk powder has caused kidney stones in babies.习作点评你校上周举办了“英语周”活动。请你根据下列提示写一篇英语短文,介绍“英语周”活动期间的情况并谈谈你的感受。活动时间:3月15日3月21日活动对象:全体同学、英语教师以及两位英语外教活动内容:活动效果:注意:1.词数120150;2可适当增加细节以使行文连贯,语句通顺。Last week our school began an “English week”【举行活动要用hol
4、d,所以此处应该改为held。】It started on Mar. 15 and ended on Mar. 21. All the students and English teachers, included two foreign teachers from America took_part in it. 【“包括在内”,应该使用介词including宾语;“参加”最好使用高级词语“participate”,所以改为participated。】During that week, we sang quite a few English songs and joined in Engli
5、sh speaking contests developing our interest in English. 【此处应该为动词不定式作目的状语。所以改为to develop。】 In addition, we put on short English plays and watched English films, which we learned a lot. 【表示“从中学到”,此处应该使用from which。】Besides, we had a wonderful time guessing English riddles.As_everyone_knows_that practi
6、ce makes perfect. 【as引导非限制性定语从句,不是主语从句的形式主语,可改为It is known that或As everyone knows,】As a result of this activity, we broadened our horizon, became more interested in English and our speaking ability has greatly improved. I think its a effective way to learn English, so I enjoyed it very much.【此处应该使用a
7、n,后面是元音音素开头的单词。】In the future, I will spare no efforts to participate in such kind of activities if possible.露一小手(1)(2013北京)假设你是红星中学高三(1)班的学生李华,请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,用英语写一篇周记, 记述爸爸出差期间,妈妈生病,你照顾她的过程。注意:1. 周记的开头已经为你写好。 2. 词数不少于60。_参考范文:Last Monday ,my father said goodbye to my mother and me and went on a busi
8、ness trip.He would be away for three days.Just the next morning,I found my mother wasnt feeling well.She had a cold.I immediately went to get her some medicine and then prepared some noodles for her.With my special care, my mother recovered quickly. When my father came back home,my mother told him w
9、hat had happened,He praised me for what I had done.I felt very happy that I had done something for my mother.(2)(2012福建)假定你是某中学生英语报的小记者,以下漫画内容是你的所见所闻,请根据要求写一篇英语短文投稿。内容要求:1描述漫画内容;2发表个人感想。注意:1短文标题与开头已给出,不计入总词数; 2考生可适当发挥,使文章内容充实、连贯;3词数20左右; 4文中不能出现考生的具体信息。参考词汇:告示牌signMind Your Behavior in Public Places
10、Last_Sunday,_I_went_sightseeing_with_my_friends_in_the_Fairy_Lake_Park._参考范文:Last Sunday,I went sighting with my friends in the Fairy Lake Park.The park was full of freshness and beauty of spring,with the sun shining and birds singing.When I was enjoying the fantastic scenery around,something unplea
11、sant caught my eyes.A young couple in a boat were eating,talking and laughing loudly as if they were the only people in the world.Whats worse,they spat and even threw rubbish into the lake,totally ignoring the noticeable sign“No Littering” nearby. What a shame!Such behavior left me deep in thought.If all visitors to the Fairy Lake Park do as the couple did,the lake will be severely polluted and soon turned into a huge dustbin.I think all of us should mind our behavior in public places.Only in this way can we live in more comfortable and beautiful surroundings.