1、Section Writing写游记类记叙文写作技法指导游记类记叙文的写作就是记述旅途中的所见所闻, 并通过对当地的风土人情、 山川地貌、 人文景致、 名胜古迹等方面的描写来表达作者的思想感情。写好此类文章一般需要注意以下方面:1确定好写作的顺序,选择恰当的线索将游记中各个要素连接起来,可按照时间顺序来写;2描写景物切忌面面俱到,要根据写作的主题有选择、有重点地写;3在景物描写的基础上进而抒发自己的感情,也就是通过情景交融的方式把自己的思想感情渗透到所写的景物中。1段首常用语: (1)I went to.by train/bus.(2)That was my first visit to.2段
2、中常用语: (1)On the way to., we.(2)After.hours riding.(3)We did not stop enjoying ourselves until.3段尾常用语: (1)We had a good time/enjoyed ourselves.(2)This is unusual/unforgettable.(3)Ill never forget.(4)I will remember.forever.(5)This was a real lifechanging experience that I would never forget.(6)We wer
3、e very tired, but we really had a wonderful day.满分佳作构建假如你是李华,暑假期间你去朋友Mike所在的城市悉尼旅游,回来后你想对他表达自己的感激之情。请你根据以下要点给Mike写一封信:1感谢Mike的帮助和热情款待;2悉尼的风景和美食令人印象深刻;3在悉尼玩得很开心,增长了见识;4邀请Mike 来中国旅游。注意:1.词数100个左右;2可适当增加细节,使行文连贯。体裁记叙文时态一般过去时主题旅游人称第一人称和第三人称结构第一部分:感谢Mike第二部分:悉尼的特色,玩得开心第三部分:邀请Mike来中国.对接模块词汇1local当地的2scene
4、ry风景3guide向导4journey旅程5exhausted疲惫不堪的6souvenir纪念品7have a good time玩得开心.巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1感谢你的帮助和热情款待。我去年暑假在悉尼旅行。Thank you for your help and good treat. I was travelling in Sydney last summer vacation.2游览悉尼真是太棒了。Its really nice to visit Sydney3悉尼的美景和美味食物给我留下了很好的印象。Sydneys beautiful scenery and delicio
5、us food gave/left me a good impression(二)句式升级4用while升级句1Thank you for your help and good treat while I was travelling in Sydney last summer vacation.5用定语从句合并句2和句3【导学号:33882032】It is really nice to visit Sydney, whose beautiful scenery and delicious food gave me a good impression 【参考范文】Dear Mike,How
6、are you doing? Thank you for your help and good treat while I was travelling in Sydney last summer vacation. You were so kind and friendly to treat us to the local food, and show us around the city. It is really nice to visit Sydney, whose beautiful scenery and delicious food gave me a good impression. I had a great time there and learned a lot about Sydney. Mike, are you free these days? I would like to invite you to visit China. Ill act as a guide to show you around the places of interest in my hometown.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li Hua