1、书面表达新题型2014新题赏析(读写任务;完成句子)主讲教师：麻雪玲 北京市英语教师 读写任务命题特点任务分为两部分，即TASK 1、SummaryTASK 2、Opinion“读”和“写”的有机结合“读”的材料是为“写”提供情景“写”是对“读”的材料的思考和延伸题一：阅读下面短文，然后按照要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文。 Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other peoples clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars ea
2、ch time. Certainly nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi.The money was in fact her life savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learn
3、ed to drive, and when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation（捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did s
4、he begin to travel all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House.Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She
5、 said to the reporters that the idea of helping somebodys child go to college gave her much pleasure. 1. 作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文的句子。2. 作文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。 概括准确， 语言规范，内容合适，篇章连贯。第一步：审题1. 认真阅读要求，充分理解材料信息。2. 体裁3. 人称 4. 时态5. 要点体裁：叙议结合文人称：三人称为主，一人称为辅时态：叙述部分：过去时为主 议论部分：现在时为主要点： 4个第二步：分段Para.
6、 1 要点一：用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。Para. 2 要点二：你如何看待她的捐赠行为。Para.3 要点三：你认为她的捐赠对受惠学生有何影响。Para.4 要点四：如果你自己要捐助，你会选择哪个群体并陈述理由。第三步：概括文章，提炼要点Para 1：用约30个词概括上文的主要内容。 Oseola McCarty spent more than 75 years washing and ironing other peoples clothes. As a laundrywoman, she was paid only a few dollars each time. Certainly
7、 nobody would consider her rich, so they were all amazed when Miss McCarty decided to donate $ 150,000 to the University of Southern Mississippi. The money was in fact her life savings. She could save such a large amount of money because she lived a very simple life. She never learned to drive, and
8、when she wanted to go somewhere, she just walked. She never flew to anywhere till the donation（捐助），and in 50 years she had been out of the South only once. The house in which she lived was also a rather modest one her last uncle left her. Only after she became known in America did she begin to trave
9、l all over the country. Since then, she had been the subject of many interviews and articles and was even invited to the White House. Her donation was for students who clearly needed financial help. She herself left school in the sixth grade and had never married or had children. She said to the rep
10、orters that the idea of helping somebodys child go to college gave her much pleasure.Oseola McCarty, though living a simple life, donated all her savings to a university to help the students with financial problems, which has brought her widespread social recognition. A kind laundrywoman with a low
11、pay donated to a university a lot of money she saved by living a simple life to help the students having financial problems. 第四步：填句、填词Para.2: I feel by her kindness 她的行为使我深受感动。 她对有困难的人慷慨解囊。她对大学生表现出的关心使她成为所有人应该学习的榜样。moved, touched, impressed, inspired, generous, be concerned for, be worth respecting,
12、 made herself a good example Para.3 ：In my opinion, those who received her donation will 她的援助不仅使那些学生摆脱了经济负担， 并倍受鼓舞，他们会更加努力并获得成功。更重要的是，他们会将爱心传递，继续去帮助其他有困难的人。be encouraged, study harder, achieve success, pass love and help on to Para.4 ：If I have the chance to donate, I will help , because 如果我有机会捐赠，我也
13、会资助那些贫困大学生,因为他们是整个世界的未来。拥有了知识、以及善良和爱心，他们会把这个世界创造的更加美好。the future of the world, knowledge, kindness, virtue, become more beautiful第五步：衔接，修饰、润色、检查高分主要来自：内容， 层次， 衔接临场失分六大原因：审题、内容、衔接、层次、错误、书写完成句子命题意图强化语法概念，积累知识储备树立结构意识，规范表达方式题二：阅读下列各小题，根据汉语提示，用句末括号内的英语单词完成句子，并将答案写在答题卡上的相应题号后。例：_ was that the young playe
14、r performed extremely well in the table tennis tournament. (delight) 令球迷欣喜的是那位年轻的球员在乒乓球锦标赛中表现得极为出色。答案：What delighted the fans/made the fans delighted71. The community college has to cut down on staff _. (save) 为了省钱，那所社区学院只好裁员。72. So far the well-known journalist _ more than 4,000 interviews with fam
15、ous people. (accumulate) 迄今为止这位著名记者采访名人已累积达四千余人次。73. Sometimes _ to use examples to explain abstract concepts. (helpful) 有时候举例也许有助于解释抽象的概念。74. The police will reward _ useful information to catch the robber. (provide) 任何人提供有用信息帮助抓住劫匪，警方将予以奖励。 75. Hes the only student in the class _ to take part in t
16、he Model United Nations conference. (select)他是班上唯一被选上去参加模拟联合国大会的同学。76. No other technological development has had _ as the growth of electronics on so many aspects of social, economic, and cultural development. (impact) 没有哪项技术的发展像电子技术这样，对我们的社会、经济以及文化等诸多方面产生过如此重要的影响。77. You _ the meeting to tell me t
17、hat ; you could have come to tell me afterwards. (interrupt) 你不该打断会议来告诉我那件事，你本可以会后告诉我。78. This novel was once the _ book in high schools in the United States. (read) 这部小说曾经是美国高中阅读最广泛的书。79. The Public Square is an eye-catching sight of the city. _ many stone sculptures of famous historical figures. (
18、stand) 大众广场是这个城市引人注目的景点，许多历史名人的石雕像矗立在那儿。80. It was several minutes _ what he was saying. (take) 过了好几分钟，我才理解他说的是什么。书面表达新题型2014新题赏析(读写任务;完成句子)讲义参考答案 读写任务题一：One possible versionFrom this passage, we have learnt that Oseola McCarty, though living a simple life, donated all her savings to a university to
19、 help the students with financial problems, which has brought her widespread social recognition.What she has done makes me deeply moved and inspired, which well proves her kindness. Being helpful and generous to the college students with financial difficulties, she has made herself a good example to
20、 motivate other people to participate in the similar activities.From my perspective, the ladys generosity is not only a means of assistance to those students short of money but also it will strengthen their faith in future life, leading them to work harder and achieve success. Whats more important i
21、s that they will undoubtedly pass the love on to whoever needs help in the future.Given the choice, I will also make donations to the students with financial difficulties, for they are the future of the world. With knowledge, kindness and virtue, they will make a great difference to our world.完成句子题二
22、：71. in order to save money/so as to save money72. has accumulated 73. it might/may be helpful74. whoever provides/has provided 75. that has been selected76. such a great impact/as great an impact/such an important impact/so important an impact77. shouldnt have interrupted/oughtnt to have interrupted78. most widely read79. There stand 80. before I could take in/before I took in