1、Period Reading for Writing1_sight_ /sat/ n. 景象； 视野； 视力2_statue_ /sttu/ n. 雕塑；雕像3_tomb_ /tum/ n. 坟墓4_unearth_ /n/ vt. 挖掘；发掘5_comment_ /kment/ n. 议论；评论vi.& vt. 发表意见；评论Step 1Prewriting1Talk about your travel plan：transport, accommodations and other reservations.2Look at the email below and know what an
2、 email includes.Step 2Whilewriting1输入为先，阅读梳理文脉Task 1: 文本整体理解： 关注布局谋篇Read the email and the passage to get some useful information from it.(B)1What makes Richard surprised about the Terracotta Army? AThey are so well kept.BThe number is so large.CThey are so far away.DThey were so difficultly made.(C
3、)2Why is Richard planning to visit the Shaanxi History Museum? ABecause it is near the Terracotta Army.BBecause it has books explaining Qinshihuang.CBecause his father loves history. DBecause it has many other statues.(B)3Why were so many statues made in the tomb?ATo show Qins great power.BTo guard
4、the tomb.CTo serve the people here.DTo show the different people. (D)4Who discovered the tomb?AThe researchers.BThe scientists.CThe army. DSome farmers.(A)5What is the email mainly about? AA travel plan to Xian.BA brief introduction to the Terracotta Army.CPlaces of interest in Xian.DThe Chinese tre
5、asure house.Task 2: 文本细节理解： 学习特色表达1Read the email again and find out how the email is organised.ParagraphMain ideaPara.1main purpose of the trip_go_to_Xian_to_see_the_Terracotta_Army_Para.2other plans for the trip_visit_some_other_places_in_Xian,_such_as_Shaanxi_History_Museum_and_Xian_City_Wall_Par
6、a.3transport_by_train_Para.4final thoughts_write_soon;_send_photos;_ask_for_his_friends_plan_2从邮件中找出至少四处描述旅游计划的句子。_Over_the_October_holiday,_my_parents_and_I_are_planning_to_go_to_Xian_to_see_the_Terracotta_Army._Were_also_going_to_the_Xian_City_Wall_and_a_few_other_famous_sights._Were_taking_the_tr
7、ain,_leaving_the_day_before_the_October_holiday_begins._Were_arriving_at_9：30_am._and_will_start_sightseeing_right_away._2细读课文，关注表达策略学结构电子邮件(email)与一般信件一样，包括开头、正文和结尾部分。它具有阅读方便、传递快捷以及内容简短的特点。(1)必须在“收件人(To)”框中输入收件人的email地址，如Jim 1992。“主题(Subject)”框最好不要空着，它应该是邮件内容的简明概括。(2)email正文前的称呼。在同辈的亲朋好友或同事间可以直呼其姓。
8、写电子邮件要直接，并多用短句，以使意思清楚。(3)根据邮件正式与否选择合适的结尾。与书面信函不同的是，email的结尾可以不署名，尤其是给朋友、同学等熟人时，同时无须写出时间；邮件末尾客套用语通常也只需要一两个词，如Thanks, Best wishes等。学技巧(1)邮件第一段使用unbelievable与amazing，向对方说明了兵马俑栩栩如生，令人称奇，cant wait to do sth. 意为“迫不及待地要做某事”，展示了作者的迫切心情。(2)第一段运用了不定式短语作目的状语(to see the Terracotta Army)，宾语从句(Ive heard that)，it作
9、形式主语而that从句为真正的主语(Its amazing that)以及notuntil句型(no one in modern times until the 1970s)，这些高级结构及句式的运用写出了兵马俑的令人向往之处。学逻辑邮件第一段作者首先介绍自己在中国的情况，然后介绍了十一假期期间打算去西安看兵马俑，最后介绍了兵马俑的一些情况，思路清晰。在叙述时使用了并列连词and，使得前后衔接自然。第二、三段使用了副词also和从属连词because、并列连词and和so，使得文章前后衔接紧凑。学语言1Ive heard that it is an amazing sight, and I c
10、ant wait to go.我听说那是一个令人惊叹的景象，我迫不及待地想去。(教材P30)sightn. 景象； 视野； 视力lose sight of看不见；忽略catch/get sight of 看见at first sight 乍一看，第一眼看见at the sight of 一看见就in/within sight 看得见out of sight 看不见 【活学活用】(1)The Great Wall is one of the most amazing sights in the world.长城是世界上最惊奇的景象之一。 (2)He has very little sight i
11、n his right eye. 他右眼视力极弱。(3)新译林必修第一册Whether were walking to school, doing homework or just hanging out at the weekend, were hardly _out_of_each_others_sight_无论我们是步行去学校、做作业还是只是在周末闲逛，我们几乎都不脱离彼此的视线。(4)At the railway station, the mother waved goodbye to her daughter until the train was _out_of_sight_. A
12、t the railway station, the mother waved goodbye to her daughter until she_lost_sight_of_ the train.在火车站，母亲向女儿挥手告别，直到火车从她的视野中消失。(5)I looked out of the window and _caught_sight_of_ a train passing by very quickly.我从窗户向外看去，看见了一列急驰而过的火车。句型公式：cant wait to do sth.cannot/can hardly wait to do sth.迫不及待地要做某事
13、cannot help doing sth.禁不住/忍不住做某事 【活学活用】(1)I was so excited that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding the bicycle. 我非常兴奋，迫不及待地想尝试骑自行车。(2)新译林必修第一册I _cant_wait_to_ describe to you what senior high school life is like.我迫不及待地想向你描述一下高中生活是怎样的。(3)When we watched the clown performing，we could not help _la
14、ughing_ (laugh).看小丑表演时，我们情不自禁地大笑起来。2Each statue has a different face, leading researchers to believe that each one is a copy of a real soldier.每座雕像的相貌各不相同，这让研究人员认为每座雕像都是一名真实士兵的翻版。(教材P30)句型公式：现在分词作状语。现在分词作状语，其中的动词和主句的主语形成主谓关系，在句中可以充当时间、原因、方式、伴随、结果等状语。 【活学活用】(1)He lost his computer while shopping, _gi
15、ving_ (give)away all his secret photos.他在购物时丢了电脑，结果泄露了所有的绝密照片。(2)A lot of people disobey traffic rules, _causing_ (cause)many traffic accidents.很多人不遵守交通规则，这导致了很多交通事故。(3)His father passed away because of a fatal illness, _leaving_ (leave) the family even worse off. 他的父亲因为绝症去世了，使家里的境况更加糟糕。3Revise your
16、 draft according to your partners comments.根据同伴的评论修改你的草稿。(教材P31)comment (1)n.(something that you say or write which gives an opinion on or explains sb./sth.)议论；评论no comment 无可奉告offer comments 提意见make comments on/about sth.对发表意见/作出评论(2)vi.& vt. (to express an opinion about sb./sth.) 发表意见；评论 【活学活用】(1)
17、Dont offer comments if you cannot understand the real meaning. 如果你不能真正理解它的意义， 请不要乱提意见。(2)He commented that this novel was a masterpiece of American literature.他评论说这部小说是美国文学中的杰作。(3)Im not in a position to_make_comments_on/comment_on_ the matter. 我无权对这件事发表评论。(4)_No_comment_. I dont know anything. 无可奉告
18、。我什么都不知道。通技法学写作规范从文体上看，本单元的写作任务是写应用文类别中的“电子邮件”。电子邮件的格式通常包括三部分，即开头、正文和结尾。因此，邮件的正文是重中之重。从题材上看，本单元的写作话题为“旅游计划”。旅游计划是外出旅游时的必备项。一、基本结构介绍旅游计划的电子邮件一般包括以下几部分内容：1开头(beginning)：旅游目的地和出行时间；2主体(body)：选择目的地的原因；旅行中的活动安排(还可以写关于旅游费用、同行者等内容)；3结尾(ending)：询问计划；表达期望。二、注意事项1写作文体：电子邮件属于应用文。2主体时态：现在进行时表将来(也可使用一般将来时)，也可以根据
19、需要适当使用其他时态。3主体人称：第一人称和第二人称。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章一、话题词汇1vacation n.假期2view n. 风景；看见3book vt. 预订4trap n&vt. 陷阱；使陷入困境5jam n. 拥挤6block vt. 阻塞；阻挡7impressive adj. 给人深刻印象的8insurance n. 保险9relieve v. 缓解10destination n. 目的地，终点11take advantage of 利用12as follows 如下13take a tour 游览14set out/off 出发15leave for 动身去某地16enj
20、oy the scenery 欣赏风景17beyond description 难以形容18check in 登记入住check out 结账离开19be struck/fascinated by 被迷住20feast ones eyes on sth. 大饱眼福二、话题句型1常用的开头语My travel plan is as follows.我的旅行计划如下。Im writing to tell you something about my plans for the coming summer holiday.我写信是想告诉你关于我接下来的暑假的计划。I have an exciting
21、 travelling plan to share with you.我想和你分享一个令人兴奋的旅行计划。2主体部分常用表达Rather than having a travel agency arrange our accommodation, we took all the trouble to book the train tickets and hotel rooms on the Internet by ourselves.我们自己不辞劳苦在网上订了火车票和宾馆，而不是让旅行社安排我们的住宿。On/Upon returning home, I couldnt wait to shar
22、e the photos and experiences with my family.一回到家，我迫不及待地与家人分享照片和经历。In addition, can you recommend a reasonable tour route so that we can save more time and take in more sights?此外，你能推荐一个合情合理的观光线路，以便我们节省更多时间，参观更多景点吗？The splendid scenery of sunset on the beach will definitely leave a deep impression on
23、you/keep you spellbound.海滩壮观的日落景色一定会给你留下深刻的印象/让你入迷。Id appreciate it if you can speak English fluently and have the experience of travelling abroad，which will definitely make our trip easier.如果你能说流利的英语并且有出国的经历我将感激不尽，这将使我们的旅行更容易些。3常用的结束语Looking forward to hearing from you.期待收到你的来信。Would you like to jo
24、in me? We are sure to have a great time. 你想和我一起去吗？我们会玩得很开心。There are so many others waiting for us to explore. Lets pack our six senses and start off again next time. 还有很多其他的东西等着我们去探索。让我们收拾好六种感官，期待下次再踏上征程吧！积“黄金”模板，减少低级失误Dear ，How happy I am to _ (表明收到来信).Im pleased to inform you _ (简述个人的近况).Over the
25、 National Day holiday, we are planning to go to _ (目的地).Its said that the landscape is _ (描写具体的景物).We are going to visit several other places in _ (目的地). I have been told that it is an amazing sight and _(描写感受).By the way, Im going to _(表明意愿与期望).Best wishes.Yours sincerely，【例文鉴赏】假定你是李华，你打算和妈妈一起去度假。请
26、给你的英国笔友John写一封电子邮件，告诉他你们的度假方案并征求意见。内容包括：1出行时间；2目的地及选择此处的原因；3拟定的活动安排；4费用问题。注意：1词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。【思路点拨】【遣词造句】(1)词汇积累_together_with_ 和一起_go_on_holiday_ 去度假_prefer_ vt.宁愿；更喜欢_explore_ vt.探索_the_natural_beauty_ 自然的美景_the_traditional_food_ 传统的食物_the_7day_trip_ 七天的旅程(2)完成句子我看了几个可能(去)的地方。Ive looked a
27、t _several_possible_places_我能和妈妈一起去那里度假。I can _go_on_holiday_together_with_my_mom_ there. 我们更喜欢去新西兰的南岛。We _prefer_to_go_to_the_South_Island_ in New Zealand.我们俩以前都没去过那里。Both of us _have_never_been_there_ before.我们能够探索森林，沿海滩散步。We can _explore_the_forests_and_walk_along_the_beach_同时，我们能够欣赏自然的美景。We can
28、_enjoy_the_natural_beauty_ at the same time. (3)句式升级把句和句用定语从句合并。Ive looked at several possible places _where_I_can_go_on_holiday_together_with_my_mom_. 把句和句用原因状语从句合并。We prefer to go to the South Island in New Zealand _because_both_of_us_have_never_been_there_before_把句和句用现在分词作状语升级。We can explore the
29、forests and walk along the beach，_enjoying_the_natural_beauty_. 【连句成篇】Dear John，Ive looked at several possible places where I can go on holiday together with my mom. We prefer to go to the South Island in New Zealand because both of us have never been there before. We can explore the forests and wal
30、k along the beach, enjoying the natural beauty. We also plan to taste the traditional food.We plan to take the trip during the first week of October. The 7day trip costs about 7，000 yuan per person. But my mom only wants to spend 3，000 yuan for each. Anyhow, I think this trip sounds really exciting
31、and my mom likes it very much! Should we book it? Any advice? Please let me know.Yours sincerely，Li Hua【亮点点击】 本文用简洁明快的语言覆盖了题目中要求表达的所有信息。同时语言表达灵活，内容连贯，条理清楚；灵活地使用了连接词和过渡语。全文体现了作者较强的语言运用能力。(1)本文应用了较丰富的语法结构：定语从句where I can go on holiday together with my mom的使用，非谓语动词enjoying的使用等。(2)较多的高级词汇及短语，如prefer to, explore, natural beauty, taste, sound等。
